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Well, I still have no positive response from an agent after three rounds of submissions. I'm really getting discouraged now... Not only am I not getting published, but I can't even find an agent! I had one in the past (ST Literary), then discovered recently that it was a subsidiary of Robert Fletcher(!)

I've pretty much run out of ideas, as well as agents to query. If anyone has any suggestions, please forward your ideas.
 

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keep at it.

and when you have completed exhausted all possible agents and publishers, start over with the next book.
 

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Remember -- it only takes one. Maybe you want to take a fresh look at your query, if you aren't getting any interest from agents. Meanwhile, get started on something new -- even if it's just tossing around ideas for your next book. Nothing beats the submission blues like getting excited about a new project.
 

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Ditto all of the above, but also, you might try looking back at your rejections and doing a bit of analysis.

1. Did you get any requests for pages at all?
If yes: Then chances are the problem is in the book somewhere. Either the writing isn't up to pro level yet, or the story isn't grabbing fast enough yet.
If no: Then the query isn't working. It's either the writing, the story, or both.

For both of these, you might consider posting in the Share Your Work section and getting some feedback. Folks will be able to help with why you might be getting rejected and have suggestions on how to better your chances.

2. Did you get any personalized feedback or was it all form rejections?
If all form: Same as the above.
If you got feedback: Did you address those comments and try to fix them for that story or the next story you wrote?

3. Do you have a critique group or writing partners?
If yes: Perhaps look over old crits to see if you missed something, or get some new crits on the final manuscript. Or, perhaps think about a new group if this one has taken you as far as it can. Sometimes writers do outgrow their groups and need to find others who can push them to the next level.
If no: Consider finding other writers who can read your work and offer feedback. It's hard to see the flaws in our own work sometimes, and an outside perspective can be quite helpful.
 

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I went through probably 20 submissions before I even knew about my agent (I only used pub marketplace). After that, I went through some more because I was too terrified to query him. Ended up never getting a request until I got 2 fulls from him and another at the same time. In the end it worked out. So, don't worry. It'll just take time--it's not about finding any agent, it's about finding the right agent for you.
 

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Ditto all of the above, but also, you might try looking back at your rejections and doing a bit of analysis.

1. Did you get any requests for pages at all?
If yes: Then chances are the problem is in the book somewhere. Either the writing isn't up to pro level yet, or the story isn't grabbing fast enough yet.
If no: Then the query isn't working. It's either the writing, the story, or both.

For both of these, you might consider posting in the Share Your Work section and getting some feedback. Folks will be able to help with why you might be getting rejected and have suggestions on how to better your chances.

2. Did you get any personalized feedback or was it all form rejections?
If all form: Same as the above.
If you got feedback: Did you address those comments and try to fix them for that story or the next story you wrote?

3. Do you have a critique group or writing partners?
If yes: Perhaps look over old crits to see if you missed something, or get some new crits on the final manuscript. Or, perhaps think about a new group if this one has taken you as far as it can. Sometimes writers do outgrow their groups and need to find others who can push them to the next level.
If no: Consider finding other writers who can read your work and offer feedback. It's hard to see the flaws in our own work sometimes, and an outside perspective can be quite helpful.

This - follow these steps to try to determine the issue.

And if you do stop at 1. - ie, no requests for partials, then consider working the query in QLH and getting critique on the first 1000 words of the book in the appropriate SYW forum. Or consider if the concept, wordcount, etc. could be leading to autorejections at the query stage.

good luck.

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I've pretty much run out of ideas, as well as agents to query. If anyone has any suggestions, please forward your ideas.

Query editors and publishers. Do more research on agents and editors and publisher who publish what you write, and keep sending out the manuscript.

While you're waiting to hear back, start on the next manuscript. And so on.

Publishing is a marathon, not a sprint. Patience a short memory are critical things to have in the business. Good luck!
 

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Well, I still have no positive response from an agent after three rounds of submissions. I'm really getting discouraged now... Not only am I not getting published, but I can't even find an agent! ...

Question. Can you clarify what you mean by "rounds of submissions?" Are these queries, and if so, how many were sent out in a round? If it's just a few, you haven't even stratched the surface. You can put your query and first few pages up in the appropriate threads of the Share Your Work forum (password is "vista"), and see what people think, if that's helpful. You'll want to read the stickies at the top first. The threads you'd look for are "Query Letter Hell" and which ever thread applies to the genre you're writing in. It will be honest feedback, so be ready, but it will be well-intentioned.

If by "submissions" you mean you've submitted requested material to reputable agents and had it rejected, then it's definitely too early to worry. Getting three requests is a good sign. Getting three rejections on requested material? Again, scratching the surface. Unless it's three requests off of scores of queries (all appropriately researched and sent individually with personalized salutation and an understanding of what the agent represents), in which case, I'd certainly have your book looked at by someone in the know--either here, or wherever knowledgable, industry informed people you're comfortable with skulk. Maybe there's a fix. Maybe it's time to move on. From this, it's impossible to say.

And remember, querying is hard for everyone. It's a soul sucking endeavor, but for me, it built resiliance and taught me to take criticism gratefully. Hang in there, whatever the right answer is for you.

Good luck!
 

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Query editors and publishers. Do more research on agents and editors and publisher who publish what you write, and keep sending out the manuscript.

While you're waiting to hear back, start on the next manuscript. And so on.

Publishing is a marathon, not a sprint. Patience a short memory are critical things to have in the business. Good luck!

It's really a bad idea to query editors/publishers at the same time as agents. If the OP has exhausted all possible agents or decides to stop looking for an agent, then maybe submitting to editors/publishers would be another route to take.

But if the OP is going to continue to look for an agent, it is a really bad idea to submit to editors/publishers at the same time - for many reasons, not the least of which is the OP could burn all houses with slush pile rejections before finding an agent, and then their eventual agent will have no where left to submit it.

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Yeah...I wouldn't go to publishers...I couldn't imagine doing this without an agent. It's not an easy business, it's nice to have somebody there to help you through the craziness.
 

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It's really a bad idea to query editors/publishers at the same time as agents. If the OP has exhausted all possible agents or decides to stop looking for an agent, then maybe submitting to editors/publishers would be another route to take.

I'll have to politely disagree with you. Why not send the manuscript to someone who can actually make an offer on the manuscript? Agents can't and don't buy books. Publishers and editors do.

Getting a publisher's offer in hand can also make it much easier to get an agent, because you've saved them the work of finding a publisher.

Yeah...I wouldn't. go to publishers...I couldn't imagine doing this without an agent. It's not an easy business, it's nice to have somebody there to help you through the craziness.

All the more reason for writers to learn the ins and outs of the business and how to at least read, if not negotiate, a contract.

I definitely encourage writers to look at all angles of it. Getting an agent isn't the only way to get published. Plenty of writers sell their first novel to major houses without an agent. Question everything, especially when you're considering giving 15% of your writing income to an agent. Writing's a business; the better informed a writer is, the better off they'll be.
 

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I'll have to politely disagree with you. Why not send the manuscript to someone who can actually make an offer on the manuscript? Agents can't and don't buy books. Publishers and editors do.

Getting a publisher's offer in hand can also make it much easier to get an agent, because you've saved them the work of finding a publisher.


True. But here's the thing.

If you are querying publishers at the same time as agents, and unfortunately get nothing but rejections from editors at publishing houses, but do get accepted by an agent, the agent will then have nowhere to send your MS as you've exhausted all your options and well, then, you won't have an agent for very long either.

If however you query all agents first and no one is interested, and THEN query publishers, you can always go back to an agent with contract in hand and say, "You like me now?"

On the other hand you can't go back to the publisher who has already rejected the MS and say the same thing, even with an agent on side.

So it makes sense to start with agents. And then move onto publishers. Because you can always go BACK to an agent who has rejected you. You can't go back to a publisher who has rejected you.



As to the latter half of your post, I agree, one must always be well informed, but the way you trot out the 15% thing makes me think you are one of those people who isn't so keen on the concept of agents. Which is all well and good. There are several others on this site who are on your side.

But I might as well say the same old same old in response to the whole 15% argument. Almost universally an agent will get a better offer for their author than an author will get on his own. And even after paying the 15%, it will still likely result in the author making more money than had they gone with the initial deal from the house.

Also, an agent fights for the rights of their author. I have a friend who was recently offered a deal on 3 books that was pretty insulting. Her agent insisted it wasn't good enough. Guess what? She now has a much better deal, one that's respectful of her talents and her contributions to the publishing house (this is her second series with them).

You say writing's a business. It certainly is. Which is why almost every single professional writer our there has an agent. Because they know they need an advocate on their side to help them get what they deserve.

But you are right, there are other ways to get published, and get deals. But your quote of "plenty of writers sell to major houses without an agent" is a little exaggerated. Some do. Most writers who sell books without an agent do so to smaller publishing houses. There are exceptions of course, and there's nothing wrong with going with a smaller press, there are huge advantages to it actually. But to say that writers sell all the time to the big six without an agent. . . well that's a bit of a fib.
 
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Well, actually, there are only a handful of publishers out there that are A-list that a writer can submit to without an agent. And they waiting times for them are hellacious, depending upon the genre, of course. The majority of the other houses are print-on-demand, and offer no advance (to speak of), thus not interesting or alluring any good agents.

For example, isn't it quite true that large publishers that do allow unagented submissions, rarely buy, if ever, from the slush pile? I've read this in editor blogs. Agented manuscripts get priority.

Hint: Try subbing to agents that take your sub-genre. I used Thriller, Suspense, and military espionage (even a few action/adventure), and it worked out well.

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I can't even find an agent! I had one in the past (ST Literary), then discovered recently that it was a subsidiary of Robert Fletcher(!)

This may sound mean, but I promise that's not my intent.

Stop thinking in these terms. You did NOT used to have an agent; you fell for a known scam. You've never had an agent, and thinking otherwise may be hurting you - especially if you mention the non-existent agent.

You're not back at square 1, you've yet to leave, but that's not a bad thing. You can polish up your MS.

I'll have to politely disagree with you. Why not send the manuscript to someone who can actually make an offer on the manuscript? Agents can't and don't buy books. Publishers and editors do.

You don't have the connections to get a read from a top tier editor. Agents do, and they know which editors already have similar projects in the works, which saves everyone time. Also, even if you do manage to snag an editor who'll read your submission, it's at the bottom of the pile. Agents, especially agents who are setting up auctions, are far ahead of you. The editors know them, and they know that what they're being pitched won't waste their time. An agent might get through in a couple of months, unagented, it can more like 2 years.

Getting a publisher's offer in hand can also make it much easier to get an agent, because you've saved them the work of finding a publisher.
Not really. You still have to find an agent willing to take on the project (which could mean a one-time deal, not career) and you've also stripped their leverage. You've got ONE editor willing to pay you what's most likely a low figure, so it's not worth much of an agent's time. If you go agent first, then you can have more than one editor reading at the same time, which can lead to an auction.

Author submissions are almost always restricted to "exclusive", which means you can't submit elsewhere until you hear back from the first one - 1 to 2 years.


Plenty of writers sell their first novel to major houses without an agent.
Bull.
 

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Well, some major houses will accept unsolicited--but primarily in Sci-fi/fantasy, and you'll be waiting at least a year to hear back, if ever. And, in general, there's a large enough difference between an advance with an agent and one without that the 15% more than pays for itself. I, for one, would never choose to do it any other way.
 

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I have a feeling I'm just not fitting into the forum's groupthink about the one-true way ism regarding agents and publishing. That being said, here's an informal survey Jim Hines put together regarding writers, first time novel sales and so on. Has some flaws that Jim admitted, but it's a start at illustrating that not everyone makes use of an agent to sell novels.

Dean Wesley Smith, Laura Resnick, and Kris Rusch have also posted at length, primarily here, about agents and publishing options involving and not involving agents. I'd encourage all readers to check these writers out to at least get another perspective. Agents will work for many writers, won't work for others, and a writer has to be able to make the decision for themselves whether to use or not use an agent, to get an agent before a deal, and so on.
 

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As a matter of fact Jim posted that survey here on the site (both in search of participants and then the subsequent results), and I participated in it (as a matter of digression, we've met a few times and I've even interviewed him). And I personally don't see how anything we've said in response to you in any way goes against what that survey suggests.

We aren't all of a groupthink mentality, no matter how many times people accuse us of that. I believe I personally acknowledged that there are cases when selling without an agent is an option. Smaller presses being one of them.

Someone else here noted that in the SF/Fantasy world (which is the one I believe you are in - yup I clicked on your signature :) ), there are publishers considered quite major to which you can submit directly, again with usually a much longer wait time than had you subbed with an agent.

It also depends on your goal of publishing doesn't it? What kind of house you want to be published with, if you are interested in selling foreign rights, movie rights etc. Not everyone wants that.

It also depends on your connections. Some people might begin in non-fiction say and develop relationships with publishers/editors etc over time. These people might then be asked if they are interested in working on a specific fiction project, and things can snowball from there. However most of us aren't that well connected, so need an inside man as it were, which is why an agent is most useful for us.

But back to Jim's study. You'll still note the majority of authors who sold did so with agents. Moreover, there was no specification as to what kind of publishers those were, nor what kind of publishers were sold to without an agent. I think that's kind of a big deal. You'll also note no financial breakdown. Jim had quite a wide selection of authors answering. And I would be very interested to know the average sale number for each category. My guess, and it is only that, is that the agent sold category would have a higher average.

Maybe it's all semantics here, that's our issue. Maybe for you major publisher means something different than it does to some of us. I personally am referring to those big six that are closed to submissions without an agent. But you might be including the big ones in the SF/Fantasy community like Tor and Daw (and I am in no way dismissing these by not including them in my initial assumption about your meaning, I would be more than thrilled to get a deal with either those publishers).

Please don't think that just because we disagree with your opinions (which were rather broadly painted, and generalised, possibly therefore leading to the confusion we are now facing) that it means we suffer from groupthink. And please don't lower yourself to using that argument, as it is beneath you. Re-read our replies to you and note that even though in general we agree with each other, we all have different points to make that are not entirely in sync with each other.

As for your link to Dean Wesley Smith . . .well . . . I've read his articles and I don't exactly consider him an expert source. Mostly because of a particular attitude exemplified in this quote: Most agents you can get as an unpublished writer is not an agent you are going to want once you actually sell a book.

Aside from the poor grammar of that sentence, that is the biggest piece of bull ever, and I simply therefore can't respect anything else that man has to write. Because it is not true. Every single author I know was unpublished when they got their agent, and that would be their agent that sold their work and subsequent works. My first agent was one of the top agents in the UK and I had never had a single word published. And anyone who propagates the idea that an agent who takes on an unpublished author is likely a crap agent is not someone who I will trust to tell me anything about how the publishing industry works.

He also has a whole thing about blogging agents selling very little, which again I find an odd conclusion to draw as you have agents like Kristin Nelson who has NY Times bestselling authors as her clients and yet also blogs every day.

Basically I find most of his conclusions are either logical fallacies or drawn from faulty premises.

(Also I am well aware that there are people out there who believe an agent should be little more than an employee, and I say fine if that's what works for them. Me, I love having a partner in crime. I love having an agent who's opinion I respect, and who can act also as an editor when I need it. Do I always take her opinion? Nope. I'm pretty hard headed at times. But I do appreciate having someone else willing to help me out that way. I like editors in general, love the rush of working together to create something awesome, and some agents out there are very good editors as well. At least mine have been.)

In conclusion:

I don't disagree for a moment that there are other ways to get published than by having an agent. There certainly are. There are even some quite successful authors out there who have never used one. But the way you put it in this thread, the idea that there are many authors who have published sans agent with the big houses, is slightly misleading. And I still believe your suggestion of querying agents and editors at the same time is faulty. By all means, choose not to query agents at all and just do editors. But if you want both, I really do believe agents first, editors second, for the reasons I explained above.

You have a great deal of experience in the publishing industry, and I am sure we can learn much from it. But is it possible for you to share your ideas without automatically thinking we are all automatons that have been blinded by some evil agent alien creature. Some of us have a wee bit of intelligence and know what we're doing. Just as, I have no doubt, you do.
 
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First,keep pushing. Rejection is the name of the game with this business. Revise your query letter. Do some more editing. Start work on another book.


Second,an agent is an absolute must. in my opinion,it's like being your own lawyer with a fool for a client. An agent can open doors and make moves that an author,especially an unpublished one,cannot.

I don't see an issue wuth paying 15%. A good agent is worth that and then some.
 
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