Hey You Guys! (question for mama Jude and all the M/T/S groupies

sheadakota

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So- I was playing around with something new- not really sure where i want to go with it and not really sure I want to post it in SYW- but was wondering if I could abuse you guys with it-

It's not long- but I would really like to know how bad it sucks:tongue-

Not looking for a line by line or anything- just a genral review of sorts- does it work- or not-

Would that be okay to post here- or would Mama Jude prefer I post it in SYW?
 

heyjude

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Hey, shea... The rule of thumb is that people usually post in SYW and then post in their individual forums with a link. Or like gothicangel said, PM some people you know and trust for private crits.

Knowing you, I'm sure it's brilliant. :Sun:
 

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No problem Jude- thats why I asked first ;) thanks GA!
 

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You can PM me too, shea. Though I'm definitely going offline for tonight!
 

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You can send it too me, too. I'd be happy to look at it for you.
 

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I'd be glad to look at it. PM me.

Might not be able to get to it until tomorrow, though.
 

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you guys are awesome! thanks- I'll get those PMs to you!