As the thread title said, I'm looking for a beta who can help me with my short scifi story Objects In Space (link is in my siggie) which is up in SYW.
(Obviously, I'd send you the file in Word-format
, but this way you can get a feel for the work that needs to be done.)
The biggest issue is that the first half of the story is slow, and I need help with that. Also, awkward sentences and basically anything that jumps out at you would need to be addressed.
Please take a look at the story and let me know. Thanks!
(Obviously, I'd send you the file in Word-format
, but this way you can get a feel for the work that needs to be done.)The biggest issue is that the first half of the story is slow, and I need help with that. Also, awkward sentences and basically anything that jumps out at you would need to be addressed.
Please take a look at the story and let me know. Thanks!
