Hi there. My name is Josh Vogt and I am looking for someone(s) to read through my latest fantasy manuscript. The working title is Raethe, and the summary is as follows:
When a kingdom's harmless system of shadow magic suddenly turns deadly, a ceremonial warrior, a theatrical apprentice and a prostitute become unlikely linchpins of hope in helping the kingdom survive the ensuing chaos.
It fluctuates between 90-100k wordcount, depending on what revision pass I'm on. Not YA, just to clarify that. I certainly am open to beta exchanges. I'm looking for overall advice/insight regarding any aspect of the story that could use improvement. Plot, character, pacing, tension, etc.
Authors I love: Brandon Sanderson, Jim Butcher, Joe Abercrombie, Steven Erikson, Robert Jordan, T.A. Pratt, Terry Pratchett, Steven Brust, Kay Kenyon...and the list goes on.
When a kingdom's harmless system of shadow magic suddenly turns deadly, a ceremonial warrior, a theatrical apprentice and a prostitute become unlikely linchpins of hope in helping the kingdom survive the ensuing chaos.
It fluctuates between 90-100k wordcount, depending on what revision pass I'm on. Not YA, just to clarify that. I certainly am open to beta exchanges. I'm looking for overall advice/insight regarding any aspect of the story that could use improvement. Plot, character, pacing, tension, etc.
Authors I love: Brandon Sanderson, Jim Butcher, Joe Abercrombie, Steven Erikson, Robert Jordan, T.A. Pratt, Terry Pratchett, Steven Brust, Kay Kenyon...and the list goes on.
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