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Beta for a short fic? (5k words)

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I'm wondering if anyone might want to read a piece of short fiction.

genre is sort of angsty YA. i haven't written a lot of short fiction, so i'm mostly curious to see if it works- does the story make sense, does it feel complete?

not looking for line edits or anything, just thoughts, general crit. i'm pretty thick skinned ;)

thanks.
 
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I'll give it a shot. I don't read much YA, so take that into account.

I'll PM you with my contact info.
 
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