I have a short story--dark fantasy, non-urban werewolves kind of thing--sitting around that I need a new set of eyes on. I think the story itself is pretty good, but my pacing is off, and there's something lacking that I can't quite pinpoint. I'd love to have someone else take a look and give me an opinion; I'm not looking for anything like a line-edit, just some broad comments on reactions and what it might need to become better.
If you're interested, PM me with an email address and what document format you prefer. I'm willing to swap with anyone else who needs a short story (or the first few chapters of a novel) in need of critique.
If you're interested, PM me with an email address and what document format you prefer. I'm willing to swap with anyone else who needs a short story (or the first few chapters of a novel) in need of critique.
