Timeline? Chronological? Jumpy? Hook?

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What's everyone's thoughts on telling a story with flashbacks? Releasing information through flashbacks that are important to develop characters? Can you release important back story better just by filling in the pieces for the reader or actually showing it? It's something I've always been fascinated with.

I'm also kind of a fan of starting in the middle giving the reader a WTF moment and then start at the beginning.

For example my WIP switches back and forth between the present and the background of the 4 MCs - it's a huge focus on hwo the past shapes the person you become and how you're past, and the things and the people that have damaged you can effect the choices you make, and how you let people treat you. But does do you think this makes it hard to follow?
 
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It's difficult to get just the right mix of elements. I've seen it fail enough times, or at least become such a hindrance that I wished the author had just told it to me straight. I think the series "Lost" was a good example of both excellent use of other timelines, AND overdoing it at other times (no pun intended). We're just so used to jumping around now, it's almost sad. I wish shows would just pick a story and tell it, but even simple nonfictional shows seem obsessed with telling 2 or 3 stories per episode, jumping around just because it's fashionable to do it that way. Argh. Brians are turning to mush. But when it works, it works. ;-)
 

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It's probably got something to do with everyone's mild forms of ADD - everyone wants to be watching, TV, playing on the computer and texting at the same time so why not throw in three different plot lines at once.

I do see your point though there's a line between overdoing it and making it work. I guess it just depends on if you can make it work...

Curious to see what other people think as well...
 

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Hey, don't insult my metamedia saviness with your luddite terminology. Just cause my augmented neurology can handle several things happening at once is no reason to get jealous, meat puppets.
 

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No insult intended ;) I was using myself as an example - I don't sit still for anything and to expect me to just sit and watch TV?? Never going to happen, I don't care how many Lost changes their timeline!
 

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Well, it also helps that Lost sucks. If you really want a great, multilayed TV show with a 5 year long plot that actually makes goddamn sense, watch Babylon 5.

As for flashbacks and shit: They are one of many tools in our verbological boxes of toolstruction. If you use a flashback where you're supposed to use a adjewrench, you're gonna have a bad time.
 

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It depends on how well you do it.

If you're going to useflashbacks, integrate them properly. If you don't, they'll jar the reader out of the story and may cause confusion. If you don't develop them properly (as in if you just 'tell' all the way through a flashback), they'll bog down the pace of your narrative.
 

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If the flashbacks are there solely to hand the reader information so they understand the "present time" scenes, that's a problem. No matter what the scene, it has to move the story along and provide all the same pieces: goals, stakes, drive. If the flashbacks hook the reader and make them want to know more, they'd work.

The WTF moment at the start, then "starting" the story seldom works, however. The reader has no context or connection with the character or events, so it doesn't mean anything to them. And since you've shown them some part of the story later, you steal tension from your story because they know that scene is coming up, so nothing really bad could happen before it or your protag wouldn't be there.

This type of story is quite difficult to pull off, but it can be done.
 

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Loving the feedback you guys rock.

Kind of in the same vein do any of you use other forms or writing to tell your story? Ex: diaries? Letters? Emails? Just curious to see what kind of mediums are being utilized...
 
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