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heyisforhumans
05-24-2010, 05:32 AM
Complementing of Light and Dark; The Universe, It Stands

A friction of beautiful light, shines through time-space;
some darkness is purveyed and is changed.
A construct reflects all of its truth by means of pure, full light,
and by the perceiver’s perfect sight.
And the mind so-arranged-towards-accuracy would understand a fullness,
which accurate sensors were trying to share.

Now, the more aligned-to that I am, the warmer a star;
And as so it goes with you.
And when otherwise I would not have had such a sight,
Some of the darkness is split by an addition of light.

If a clever eye will peer deep inside,
It would know that The Truth could not-ever lie.
Purity it is what it is and it isn’t what it’s not.

A true truth is perceived, it isn’t only a thought,
and It’s perceived as it is or it’s perceived as it’s not

The divine of the universe is a sight to be sought.

milly
05-25-2010, 07:20 AM
hey there...I think you may want to post your poetry in the poetry SYW or Poetry Critique board so you can get feedback on it...which, by the way, nice to have you here at AW and...good job with this one...can't wait to see more :)

heyisforhumans
05-25-2010, 08:36 AM
HEY thanks - criticism is what I was looking for I'm new so I guess I missed something. I'll do that. All the best everyone!