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Looking for beta for fantasy/adventure genre

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ryu_thewriter

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Hi there.
This is my second attempt at novel. It's a complete 68k words story. As an ESL I have weakness in grammar so I need someone who can point out my mistakes there among other things. I've posted a part of the first chapter here. The first two chapters could be found in fictionpress.com here.

Title: Rose's Memory
Rating: T
Summary: Rose Maris might look like a girl next door but she is actually able to see the future with the price of losing her memory. Tired of forgetting her past, she turned to her last resort, the eternal sleep. But first she must find five objects which are hidden in the infamous Underworld with nothing but her wit, her mother's notes, and a sarcastic, gun-wielding friend to help her against vampires, witches, and elves to mention a few. Needless to say Rose's life just become on hell of a bedtime story.

If interested, please post here or PM me. Thanks.

Ryu
 
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