Hi,
I'm looking for a few hard core brutal beta readers to help whip my long romance MS into shape. I have rhino skin to hit me with your best shot. Its currently 573 pgs/163k words. Been writing since I learned how to scribble letters(have around 30 MS in various stages of complete) but none have been read by anyone but me. I think I need some help tightening it up and making it shorter if that's possible!
Ok, maybe a lot more than that also, but I don't want to scare you away! lol
If you only have time for a quick read - plot, character look - ok, that's fine. Beggars can't be choosers.
Quick Storyline:
After surviving a car accident that killed both her parents and nearly left her paralyzed, Jenna Caldwell did not expect that the only other person who meant anything to her would dump her after three years of dating. Fate could not really be that cruel, could it?
Deciding that it would be a cold day in hell before she opened up her heart and let anyone in again, Jenna didn't count on the flamboyant Jackson Lattimer to stroll into her life and refuse to leave. Rich, spoiled and arrogant, Jack was a constant thorn in her side until she caught a glimpse of his vulnerable side he kept deeply hidden. Jenna soon discovered that they had more in common than she thought.
The wall she built to protect her fragile heart was suddenly crumbling under his tender kiss and when he is nearly killed in an avalanche, Jenna realizes that she'd fallen in love with the one person who could once again bring her to her knees.
If you're game, PM me.
Greatly appreciate all you betas. Couldn't get a thing to publishers without you all!!!
Thanks,
Karen
I'm looking for a few hard core brutal beta readers to help whip my long romance MS into shape. I have rhino skin to hit me with your best shot. Its currently 573 pgs/163k words. Been writing since I learned how to scribble letters(have around 30 MS in various stages of complete) but none have been read by anyone but me. I think I need some help tightening it up and making it shorter if that's possible!
If you only have time for a quick read - plot, character look - ok, that's fine. Beggars can't be choosers.
Quick Storyline:
After surviving a car accident that killed both her parents and nearly left her paralyzed, Jenna Caldwell did not expect that the only other person who meant anything to her would dump her after three years of dating. Fate could not really be that cruel, could it?
Deciding that it would be a cold day in hell before she opened up her heart and let anyone in again, Jenna didn't count on the flamboyant Jackson Lattimer to stroll into her life and refuse to leave. Rich, spoiled and arrogant, Jack was a constant thorn in her side until she caught a glimpse of his vulnerable side he kept deeply hidden. Jenna soon discovered that they had more in common than she thought.
The wall she built to protect her fragile heart was suddenly crumbling under his tender kiss and when he is nearly killed in an avalanche, Jenna realizes that she'd fallen in love with the one person who could once again bring her to her knees.
If you're game, PM me.
Greatly appreciate all you betas. Couldn't get a thing to publishers without you all!!!
Thanks,
Karen
