Journalist gets down and dirty: Need critique

hungry4more

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I am trying my hand at erotica, but after years of writing non-fiction, I am not sure my story packs enough heat. Would love some feedback.

Is there a critique thread for this genre?

Thanks,
Moxie Rich
 

kuwisdelu

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Yep.

It's in SYW along with the rest of the critique threads, but it's only open to ages 21+, so you'll need to PM a mod (Mac, ELMontague, veinglory) for the password.