A breakthrough... a literary Sophie's Choice

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So I started to work on the outline, thinking about the new starting point and working backward. The results have been eye opening. First of all the story works better from the new starting point and characters come into play at a much faster pace. This was the real issue I had with what I had done to this point. The unintended discovery AKA breakthrough came when I was considering how to work the conclusion. I thought I had it all planned out. Wrong. I have two compelling characters, both sadistic (there really isn't a hero in this story), who are redeemable. I believed that I had made a choice as to who would prevail, but now I'm not so sure. I've "discussed" it with the two of them (Ah head conversations with characters, precursor to mental issues or part of the creative process?)... but they're opposed and nothing is going to change that. They want each other dead... period. I can't sell out the story by coming up with some kind of compromise for these guys... so I am stuck. Oh, joy. Can you play rock, paper, scissor with your characters?
 

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You can play quick draw. :D

Do you deviate from your outline when you're writing? Maybe by the time you reach the end, it will be clear which one will prevail.
 

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:D

Until now, I didn't outline... so anything is possible. Changing the ending should be a huge matter and ordinarily it would be. Both characters present sympathetic arguments and justifications for doing what they do and there is no hero to save here... so it's a unique circumstance. The building to the climax is concrete, the characters are put into a situation and the only thing that is interchangeable is who walks away from it. They have a while to argue their cases.
 

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I tend to go with this idea:

Character A... Character B... they've competed for months on end for dominance in Torrance's mind. Back and forth these literary titans have dueled through the five inches of hellish territory known as the space betweeen Torrance's ears.

Finally... it's time to settle this battle... once and for all!!

LIVE from the most extreme locale known to man, Torrance brings you the war to end all wars... HELL IN A CELL!!

Two characters enter, only one leaves alive... watch if you dare.


I really need to stop watching professional wrestling once every year...
 

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:D Todd... I was actually picturing Thunderdome, "Two men enter, one man leaves!"

I am getting a cold, so today has been a wash on writing... but it hasn't stopped these two from offering suggestions. Now, thanks to you, they're on bungee cords bouncing around, trying to get to the chainsaw.

Bloody hell.