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A little background: I am writing and self-published part of a sci-fi/fantasy series a la intergalactic CSI. In other words, a small band of individuals work together to solve crimes and mysteries across the known universe, with a little misadventure and personal relationships along the way.

Book 1 in the series starts off rather abruptly; several changes of scenery that resolve themselves and get connected as the plot unfolds. It's a cold-open in the style that you ordinarily see on CSI (I watched original CSI since pretty much its first season), but translating that into novel, particularly of that genre, is interesting. Thing is, it's something that, with this particular storyline, works very well. Unorthodox, maybe; confusing, possibly, but I can't see the story without it.

This came up with my friends, editor and the ABNA reviews (got cut in Round 2). So I'm wondering: who out here has used a cold open as their introduction and did that work for you?
 

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I hate to say this, but I'm not sure what you mean when you say 'cold open'. Could you be a bit more specific?

If you mean -- the first scene is stuff is going on and we have action without a lot of background being given to the reader -- then I guess that's not too uncommon.
 

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By 'cold open' I assume you mean starting at the catalyst for the story, which is what you should do.
 

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A cold open in TV, as I understand it, means that the episode starts before the title sequence and opening credits. I think the novel equivalent would be having the story start before the title page and all that stuff. That seems extremely confusing. Perhaps the OP means starting in medias res?
 

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I would say what the OP means is showing a series of different situations, the relevance of which is not immediately obvious. A bit like a prologue.
 

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There can be no "cold open" in a novel. What are you going to do, demand the publisher to put the title page AFTER your little ditty? No way.
 

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I'm sure it's been done plenty of times before. However, this "it" that we're speaking of is like a vague shadow in my mind, as I don't entirely get what's meant, so I can't comment as to whether I've done it before or not.

So I'll try and cover all the bases...

If you meant opening scenes before the "title" scene, then this is a bit clunky and not something I've tried. I'd go as far as to say that by having your opening scene, unless it's a prologue, then you're already at your "title" scene...

If you meant a prologue, actually, no I've never done that before. I've done epilogues though. Does that count? No. One of my WIPs could use a prologue, and there's a book in my future (part of a saga) that will require a prologue, but as yet I haven't tried it.

If you meant in media res (starting in the middle of the action, then going back in time, following it forward till you reach where you started and then going on to a glorious crescendo) then again, no I haven't done this. Hmm, I'm seeing a pattern here. It's something I want to try at some point, and in a way I already have done it, if by "action" you mean "theme" - one of my books started at the "highest" point of theme, and then wound down to normal life, then built back up to a high point and then drove home to the end which is the second highest peak of theme...

If you meant a series of different situations where the relevance isn't immediately obvious, then I have kind of done this one. It wasn't a prologue, but the first few chapters of my novella were just "mood" pieces until the story started falling into place. I still count that one as starting with plot-action though, as it was erotica and starts out with my 2 MCs in bed.

Weighing all these, I'd have to go with "No, I haven't tried it."

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I suspect you mean the little snippets of the crime that often open a show like CSI. No one we know or care about, just bodies hitting the floor. "Here's the crime that the heroes are going to solve this episode" type thing.

I've never done that, but I don't write those kinds of stories. I think some thrillers work like that, but I can't think of any I've read.

The problem I'd imagine you'd have with such a start, is that books are different from TV or movies. Visual media plays by different rules. In books, readers expect the characters they first meet to be the characters they'll follow in the book. When they're not, the reader often wonders why you wasted their time with characters that A) don't survive, or B) don't matter.

Having an opening with characters that "don't matter" is a good way to lose your reader before they get into the novel. It's harder to hook a reader with that type of opening.

I'm not saying it can't be done, you might be able to pull it off, but I suspect there will be additional challenges to this type of opening. If this is how you want to start your novel, go for it and see what happens. If it doesn't work, you can always change or cut it and start where your protag is introduced.
 

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I thought "Cold Open" was the title of the novel and then I thought cool title and then I realized I didn't actually know what a cold open was. Now I do. Thanks everyone.

A lot of thrillers and mysteries start with the crime and work backward. It's very common (the "body on the first page" scenario) and quite simple to do. If that is, in fact, what you mean by a cold open.
 

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Lady Ice and Danthia had it right - I meant cold open in the context that the story starts off with a quick change ins scene that's prologue-like in its intention, but is a chapter in and of itself. Not immediately obvious what the general relevance is, but the rest of the story ties everything together and segues into the following book.

(and completely forgot the CSI credit sequence before using the term... My bad.)
 

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Lady Ice and Danthia had it right - I meant cold open in the context that the story starts off with a quick change ins scene that's prologue-like in its intention, but is a chapter in and of itself.

Ah. I think I understand what you're saying.

I'd think of this as a 'flash' opening. You got Big Exciting WhizzBang Stuff in Chapter One (or in the Prologue -- whatever you call it.)
Then the Big Exciting Action is dropped.
. . . And you pick up in the next chapter with somebody leaning over a microscope or teaching class at the University. You leave the gunfight or the charge of fire demons or the little spaceship trying to outrun the big one,
and settle down to introduce the MC and the background and what the story is about.

This is very TV-and-Movie plotting. It works well with the visual medium and tight time constraints. In books, it tends to live in the thriller/adventure/suspense field. In these genres, the whizzbang opening serves the useful function of promising more whizzbang to follow, a la James Bond.

One thing to think about, maybe, in fitting a 'flash' opening onto the front of the story is this:

All whizzbang action is not equal. What's important about the whizzbang is how it will be used in the plot structure. It's not so much the detail of what's going on, as whether you are setting up an intellectual problem or building an emotional cliffhanger.

You will intrigue readers if your Exciting Opening sets them an interesting puzzle to unravel over the rest of the book.

The pirate ship went down in 1678 -- we've just seen the stormy death of it -- and now we slip over to treasure hunters in a library in Madrid. The farmer looks up and sees a mysterious green light above him. He runs screaming down the field and falls, frothing at the mouth. -- Next scene is the farmer on the dissection table, colored green, and the forensic pathologist leaning over him.

All well and good.
These are all 'puzzle plots' and the flash at the beginning leads us into a fairly cool and intellectual story. In this case, we need little transition between 'action prologue' and the rest of the story because the flash opening is isolated, neatly rounded out, and emotionally complete. At the end of the 'flash' presentation, we are left only with the puzzle.

But let's say we end that the flash opening with the plane about to crash or the young woman trying to outrun her pursuers in the deserted underground garage or our poor CSI waking up in a glass coffin buried several feet underground and his air running out.

These are not puzzle plots.
These are emotional cliffhangers.

This sort of flash opening probably has to be approached with some care.

What you might do, in thinking of this from a writerly point of view, is pull out fifty or sixty movie examples of whizzbang openings. Star Wars. Indiana Jones. Or CSI.

Which ones set up intellectual problems? Which ones are emotional cliffhangers?

See how these two types of openings are treated differently? What you're studying here is the transition from the flash opening to the more staid 'second chapter'.

OK. Let's say that we very clearly have an emotional cliffhanger as the opening action.

How does the initial action sequence end?
How does the viewer feel when that action sequence is completed?
How does the author seque from that emotional high to the next scene?
How long does the author take to resolve the emotional issue set forth in that opening?
How much of the story is 'about' that particular emotional issue?
How does the author, in Chapter Two and Three, promise the reader that this emotional problem will get solved?

Anyhow -- that's some random thought on juggling a piece of unrelated, intense action onto the front of the story.
 
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If it works, it works. I write thrillers... so for me, I find myself compelled to start the story at the middle where the action begins and to then work back and forth from there. The issues that I confront from time to time is glossing over the series of events that brought the opening about. I hate to bring up the dread "show, don't tell" but it applies here. Worse still is when I find myself bogged down with the details that brought about the opening and find that it takes me forever to get back to the present... the equally dread "too much show, not enough tell" (which I happen to think is a far worse offense). The short and sweet of my meandering reply is this... make sure you have a plan for catching your audience up with where you're starting. You'll have to keep them entertained and involved as you build up to something they already know is going to happen.

Dear God, did that make any sense at all?! :D
 

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I'd say this 'cold open' thing is what a prologue should be used for.
 

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I'd say this 'cold open' thing is what a prologue should be used for.

Yes. It is not uncommon for mysteries or thrillers to use a prologue like this.

One of the last ones I read (and yes, it's been years) was The Da Vinci Code.
 
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