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I have four questions about law enforcement procedure. The time period is 1974. The police are ordering a suspect out of the car at gunpoint. She's a fugitive wanted for questioning in the murder of a police officer in another state. The woman's young children are in the car with her. Since the charges are completely trumped up, she has no idea what's going on, and she's stunned, not reacting quickly enough to the orders she's being given to step out of the car. Here are my questions:
When the command to exit the car is given, is she told to step out of the car with her hands behind her back, up in the air, or behind her head?
Would she be ordered to back up x number of steps and get down on her knees or would she be told to lay on the ground?
How are the police going to get the kids, four, six and eight years old, out of the car?
In some real-life accounts I've researched, the officers in these situations make frequent use of certain swear words. A direct quote from a real event: "Police! Get your ----ing asses down, down, you ----ers! Get the f--- down now! I want to see your hands behind your back, now, now, now!"
How necessary is this kind of language for realism? I'm aiming for reality but not to make the cops look like a**holes - the arresting officers only know what they've been told. They have no way of knowing the charges against her are false, but they're taking her refusal to get out of the car as an act of non-cooperation.
As always, any advice or suggestions are greatly appreciated. Thanks!
I have four questions about law enforcement procedure. The time period is 1974. The police are ordering a suspect out of the car at gunpoint. She's a fugitive wanted for questioning in the murder of a police officer in another state. The woman's young children are in the car with her. Since the charges are completely trumped up, she has no idea what's going on, and she's stunned, not reacting quickly enough to the orders she's being given to step out of the car. Here are my questions:
When the command to exit the car is given, is she told to step out of the car with her hands behind her back, up in the air, or behind her head?
Would she be ordered to back up x number of steps and get down on her knees or would she be told to lay on the ground?
How are the police going to get the kids, four, six and eight years old, out of the car?
In some real-life accounts I've researched, the officers in these situations make frequent use of certain swear words. A direct quote from a real event: "Police! Get your ----ing asses down, down, you ----ers! Get the f--- down now! I want to see your hands behind your back, now, now, now!"
How necessary is this kind of language for realism? I'm aiming for reality but not to make the cops look like a**holes - the arresting officers only know what they've been told. They have no way of knowing the charges against her are false, but they're taking her refusal to get out of the car as an act of non-cooperation.
As always, any advice or suggestions are greatly appreciated. Thanks!
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