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Beyond Eden - UF(?), first few chapters.

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I have no idea what genre this would classify as, but I think it's safe under Urban Fantasy. Protags are between the ages of 17 and 30, it's a post-apocalyptic world, of sorts. A different take on the Antichrist/The Rapture, that sort of thing.

Anyway, I didn't want to post it to SYW since I'm still feeling out what direction I'm going in and don't want it torn apart (yet), but if someone might be willing to read the first few chapters (about 4,000 words or so), just to give me an opinion on whether or not they feel it 'works,' that'd be awesome. :)

If willing, PM me or comment~!
 
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