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kaitie

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....by things that don't even have to happen yet?

I've noticed something this past week because I've been having this problem. Sometimes I get stuck on the scene I'm writing, usually because I'm writing with the wrong tone or something for that particular section and it takes a bit to figure it out.

The past week or so, however (and this is also a common problem for me), I've been stuck on parts that happen in another chapter or two. I actually even know the next two immediate scenes and have part of it written out on a notepad, but I can't write it yet because I'm so stumped by this part that comes after that. I've reread through my work, which usually is enough to give me a jump start, but until I've got some direction again and no where I'm going I'm basically grounded. This is probably one of the main reasons I'm a slower writer, honestly.

I figured out yesterday what the problem is, so now I just have to sort out where to have this particular scene happen and what one of the characters is going to do. I'll probably find someone to talk it out with and that usually does it for me, but finding that person isn't always easy.

Anyway, does anyone else have this problem? If so, what's your method for dealing with it?
 

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I started my next project, remembered this morning that I wanted something in particular to happen soon, and can't remember the motivation for it. I had a motivation for it though. If I can only remember what that was....
 

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Luckily I have an alpha reader and a writing group to bounce ideas off of. Remember you've got access to "The Sandbox" if there are specific things you want opinions on.

If I get stuck in such a way that I don't know what to write next or have a great aversion to writing something, that usually tells me that I've taken a wrong turn somewhere. In that case, I go back through and make sure everything's in sync.

If you've got the current couple of scenes mapped out and are stuck for something that happens later, I suggest go ahead and write the current scenes. By forcing yourself to commit the scene to paper and not just think about it, you might see your solution. Something about making all the decisions required to get the scene down can open up the thought processes. Even if you end up cutting the scenes later, the exercise will be worth it. No writing is wasted.
 

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Another thought - maybe you're hitting resistance in writing the current scenes because you're forcing the story to conform to what you've been planning for the later section. Perhaps it's not a natural fit. Events should follow from what's already happened. Remember, the story characters don't know what's in store for them. They can only respond to what they've already been through.
 

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It's hard to get stuck when you have no idea what's going to happen next, and don't want to know.
 

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My writing mentor once told me that when you hit a wall in a scene, the problem is usually a couple of scenes back. Since you're pre-planning scenes, maybe the problem isn't two scenes from now but in the setup in the scene you're currently writing. I also agree that forcing plot rarely makes for a good fit.
 

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I actually have the whole thing outlined and mostly figured out. My current problem is more like Namatu's. Basically I had figured something out perfectly, then forgot about it before I could write it down.

I tend to agree that usually it means I went wrong somewhere, though in this particular case it's a matter of figuring out the character and which reaction I want to have happen. I have two options, and depending on how the character finds out about something his reaction will be completely different. I had settled on one, know I don't like the other, but now I don't remember how he happened to find out. Because the next scenes I write deal with the part before that, it influences the scene coming up, if that makes sense. So if I want to get it right so that the scenes later on work, I have to sort that out and make sure that the ones I'm doing now don't screw that up so the only option is the second that I don't want to do.

I'm sorta thinking I've got at least a hint of direction now, but it basically means keeping certain aspects of what's going on from one of the other characters so he doesn't get pissed about it. :tongue I've just got to work out the impetus for my narrator going to him to discuss it in the first place.
 

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If you can do this I suggested taking a long walk in a quiet area with as little civilization and distractions as possible. That has been the single best remedy for any trouble I might run into in the story. I walk and talk to myself and by the time I'm ready to go home I've got my answer.
 

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If you can do this I suggested taking a long walk in a quiet area with as little civilization and distractions as possible. That has been the single best remedy for any trouble I might run into in the story. I walk and talk to myself and by the time I'm ready to go home I've got my answer.

I'll second taking a walk as a good way to work through problems, but if you don't have the opportunity, I also suggest sitting down with a notebook and writing down your questions. Write down answers as they come to you, or if they spawn more questions, write those down, too. Good way to brainstorm, and this way you've got a record of what was puzzling you and what you've decided.
 

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Haha, that's how I got the original really awesome idea. The only problem was that it was 1030 at night and I was walking home and it was dark so I figured I'd be better off just waiting. I wrote down parts of the conversation when I got back, just not what led up to it, so the conversation is fine, it's just the how to get there part I don't remember.

I agree, though. I get some of my best head-writing done while walking. And considering I don't have a car here and have to walk everywhere, that equates to a lot of thinking. :D
 

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If you can do this I suggested taking a long walk in a quiet area with as little civilization and distractions as possible. That has been the single best remedy for any trouble I might run into in the story. I walk and talk to myself and by the time I'm ready to go home I've got my answer.


I can't wait for the spring and warmer temps so I can go out and do some writing where there are few distractions. Like the internet!
 

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I can't wait for the spring and warmer temps so I can go out and do some writing where there are few distractions. Like the internet!

Indeed! Walking in the cold makes me think of nothing but cold. Not to mention stumbling over snow and ice can be a real distraction. So that settles it; we walk and think when it's warm and put it all down into meaningful sentences when it's cold.
 
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