Another question for my re-writes here..Just want to make sure i'm being technically and professional correct here.
What should the dialogue/action structure in screenplay format look like when a character is carrying on two conversations at once. ie. yelling at someone in the room while carrying on a phone conversation at the same time. As in instances when that character's sentences are disjointed
ex. on the phone with mom in the kitchen.
yes, i told you i could pick you up at-
no mom, i don't need any.
at the store when you're done. Ya i know, we'-
I said any, whats so hard to understand about any
not you, listen you better not -
Jesus mom, any as in none, i said don't need any, not any one.
etc etc
thanks.
What should the dialogue/action structure in screenplay format look like when a character is carrying on two conversations at once. ie. yelling at someone in the room while carrying on a phone conversation at the same time. As in instances when that character's sentences are disjointed
ex. on the phone with mom in the kitchen.
yes, i told you i could pick you up at-
no mom, i don't need any.
at the store when you're done. Ya i know, we'-
I said any, whats so hard to understand about any
not you, listen you better not -
Jesus mom, any as in none, i said don't need any, not any one.
etc etc
thanks.
