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Confused author in DESPERATE need of help

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I am about to admit something I feel that no author should ever admit. I don't know what genre my novel is. It is only 45k or so and if any of you out there are willing to give even the first 10 pages a read and give me some advice I would appreciate it on so many levels.

I am a poetry writer, a reasonably successful one, I have been published and recieved a few small awards here in Ireland and decided to take a foray into literary prose. But what began as a literary novella I feel may have turned into a young adult-ish novel. The issue is that it's based on 20 something students discovering themselves, growing, and hence could be for older YA readers or adult fiction..

ARGH. So basically i'm confused and need help and if anyone is willing to scan it for me I would be delighted.

It contains much cursing, some sex and drugs. I would be delighted if you gave me your general opinion about genre, plot holes, character development falling flat.. I do not require a grammar/punctuation person but if you do that i'm never going to say no to good advice!

PM me or email me finola.cahill(at)ucdconnect(dot)ie

Thanks in advance!
 

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Just going by your short description, it sounds like YA.
 

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You can try posting the first 1500 words or so in the YA section down in Share Your Work (password: vista). You'll usually get a few opinions and they'll let you know if your book fits in YA or not.
 

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What about New Adult? Weren't we discussing that being a new genre not long ago? It sounds closer to that than YA to me, particularly considering the ages. And don't worry, you aren't the only one! I have no idea what my current genre is either. My current plan is going to be to submit it calling it different things depending on what the agents accept. ;)
 

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YA is just a target audience. YA books range the gamut from mysteries to sci-fi. So even if it is YA, you still need more to write a good query. It's like saying your book is a MG. That still doesn't say anything about the story.
 

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Thanks for the advice. Just wondering what do you mean by "New Adult"?
 

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New Adult is a category that St. Maarten's Press is trying out. It targets the college age MC's between YA and "adult". Usually that's a hard range to place, and until recently one that some publishers/agents wouldn't even bother with. If SMP has luck with it, then more opportunities for it should open up.
 

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New Adult is a category that St. Maarten's Press is trying out. It targets the college age MC's between YA and "adult". Usually that's a hard range to place, and until recently one that some publishers/agents wouldn't even bother with. If SMP has luck with it, then more opportunities for it should open up.

So it's like the YA for older teen around 18-21 type age group?
 

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Thank you very much for all your responses, that "Upper Adult" category seems like the perfect fit and if anyone is interested in Beta reading it at all just swing me a PM :)
 

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You say students, but how old are your three main characters?
How old is your villain?

I think that does more to pin your readership than anything.
 
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