Oh!
Query improv! Gotcha.
Three sentences? As much as that? I was going for one...
I may have to add something then![]()
Imagine you are in a lift with an agent / editor. You have until they get off to pitch your novel ( so say twenty seconds or something). Generally one sentence that might make them say 'Ooh interesting'
If a query starts out 'what if...' I will delete it immediately. That sounds high-handed and it is. But I'm allergic to that phrase and all the others like it. I don't like being 'pitched' an idea because I believe ideas are easy and good writing is hard. And it's the writing I care about. So I'm not going to be enticed by a hook.
From this thread in the Ask the Agents forum:
http://www.absolutewrite.com/forums/showthread.php?t=170463
caw
I'd feel more comfortable panhandling on the street.
So . . . you get on the elevator with the agent, headed back up to her room, lean over and say, "Lesbian zombie dinosaurs in space."
Seriously, I've been to conferences and watched this kind of interaction take place, and it is about the most disgustingly oily performance imaginable. I am genetically incapable of such a thi9ng. I'd feel more comfortable panhandling on the street.
caw
So . . . you get on the elevator with the agent, headed back up to her room, lean over and say, "Lesbian zombie dinosaurs in space."