please help me punctuate this sentence

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I need help with this sentence, punctuation-wise. I don't know where to put a question mark.

(In my story, a psychiatrist is talking to a patient and says):

“Gertrude, can you even say the words aloud? Can you say, ‘I love my son’”

Where does the question mark go?

If I put it like this: "Can you say, ‘I love my son?’”
it sounds as if he's asking her if she can say 'I love my son?"

It doesn't look right to put the question mark anywhere else, and it seems wrong to leave it out completely.

any help is appreciated.


 

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“Gertrude, can you even say the words aloud? Can you say, ‘I love my son’?

If it doesn't seem right, you could always get around it by making it a command or request: "Tell me that you love your son." or "Say, 'I love my son'."
 

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Yes. I could re-write it that way, but I think I'll leave it the way it is.

I now see that Word 2007 auto-corrects it exactly as you've shown. To me, that just looks bizarre, but hey, what the hell do I know.
You live and you learn. . .

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I second what ElaraSophia said. I don't like to agree with Word, but they're right, too.

What it comes down to is what you already know. The phrase the guy is asking if she can even say is not itself a question, so no question mark goes inside its quotation markings. Yet the fact that he's asking demands a question mark within the quotation marks of his dialogue.

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“Gertrude, can you even say the words aloud? Can you say, ‘I love my son’?

If it doesn't seem right, you could always get around it by making it a command or request: "Tell me that you love your son." or "Say, 'I love my son'."

Either put the question mark inside or outside the single quote. It's correct. Doesn't look weird to me at all.
 

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“Gertrude, can you even say the words aloud? Can you say, ‘I love my son.’?”

I must be a real duffus, this is how I would have tried it.