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I've been working on a WIP for awhile now and it is unabashedly space opera (military space opera at that), but I've come to the point where I feel I might need to describe the alien "machine" that allows ships to "jump" between star systems.

The "machine" itself is huge on the inside. It might even be a whole other universe "in there", but on the outside it is difficult (virtually impossible in fact) to detect with current technology (even 200 years in the future it can occasionally be difficult to detect even by someone who knows exactly where it is supposed to be).

It is semi-aware.

Its builders are millenia gone, but they left it in a sort of "locked" state where there's only a single pathway between most systems (but each entry point, in theory, has the potential to access any other potential point). There are no more than 5 people in the entire galaxy who know how the machine can really be operated and only 1 or 2 who have actually been "inside" it.

The "machine" lies at a constant 3 light hour distance from a primary star. It transmits energy directed through it as well as matter. Ships approaching it do not have to slow down or otherwise maneuver to enter it. All they have to do is send "the codes" to transit the jump point to the system it is programmed for in its current "locked" state.

But, what does it look like from this side?

Any suggestions?

<"All I can tell you right now is that The Machine that controls the jump points is big. Big enough for an entire world, maybe more than one. It could be an entire universe in there for all I know.">
 

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Sounds a lot like a Tardis to me.

Which means that on this side, it looks like a bit like a telephone booth.
 

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No one knows what it looks like. It has been encased in a planet-sized cardboard box for millenia.
 

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The "machine" itself is huge on the inside. It might even be a whole other universe "in there", but on the outside it is difficult (virtually impossible in fact) to detect with current technology (even 200 years in the future it can occasionally be difficult to detect even by someone who knows exactly where it is supposed to be).

If it's virtually impossible to detect, doesn't that mean that no one would know what it looked like?
 

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It's a featureless black sphere a thousand kilometres in diameter. Only it's such hot property that it's been entirely covered in advertising.
 

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Sounds like the machine of the Krell on Altair IV from the movie Forbidden Planet meets the Tardis. The enourmity of machine and the unknown combined with the spacial difference from Dr Who; add in a cloaking device... Romulan or Klingon?
 

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When the heat (presumably) generated by the huge machine meets the cold of space: It's a giant cloud! A roughly spheroid mass of fog and mist, covering a diffuse arrangement of unobtanium that filters in (or out) the approaching objects from either side.
 

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I was actually, at one point, thinking it might resemble a dwarf plnet or planetoid since its so far out. Some ystems have several of them, some only one, and others none. It might even just be asteroid-sized, but a couple of people over at the Analog forum suuggested it might be huge, but diffusely-constructed (like an array of girders and antennae or something) such that it's harder to detect.
 

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Even though it is not cloaked/hidden, the game Mass Effect has this machine(s) that you are talking about. Looks like a giant gun, bigger than the space stations that house the largest of ships within the game. I would not say that it is the size of a planet, but... in relation to the game play it is a couple hundred times bigger than the ship the player is using. Concept of a giant railgun to propel ships from one mass effect device to another. In the picture provided, the device is on the left as a battle ship is entering it via the spinning rings for use.


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Interesting concept there...

The machine isn't cloaked, but it is hard to detect until and unless you know what you're looking for (then it becomes fairly obvious where and what it is).

Somebody here quite awhile back had an interesting concept for varicolored stargates. I forget who that was or what the series was the individual was writing, but some of them were, as I recall, quite funny.
 
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