You know, this isn't so bad (revision)

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Dave Willhoite

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Hi,

I am just starting to revise. This is the third novel length project that I have drafted, but the first one was a crime against humanity, and the second was merely bad.

And there might be some hope for this one.

I finished it about the end of November, and (taking Stephen King's advice from On Writing) put it in a trunk for six weeks. I know that this is a little melodramatic, but I got my Grandfather's trunk down from the attic for that part.

Four days ago, I hit six weeks. I used those six weeks to read a couple of books on revision.

And, the revising process isn't so bad. I am actually pretty excited. There were some fairly major things wrong in the first three chapters, but nothing that can't be fixed fairly easily.

I wonder if I will feel the same was twenty chapters from now, when I get to the parts where I was writing really quickly, just to get to the end of the story.

I am pretty excited at this point.

Dave
 

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I think you should feel proud to have an entire first draft done to revise! A lot of would-be authors never even get that far.
 

Danthia

Grats and good luck! That's awesome. I love revising. That's usually where the story really comes alive for me, because all my "first thoughts" are down and I start seeing deeper connections and other things I can add to make the story better. Revision isn't a bad thing :)
 

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I enjoy revising, too. I've got my block of clay and now I can work with it.
 

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Revising is where you have to confront everything you overlooked to get the first draft done - it can be painful to the point at which it hurts your brain.
I'm at that point now.
But it's also wonderful in that the revision stages give your book life - you add in layers and depth and change things that need to be changed.
Never forsake revising!
Good luck
 

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Revising is both painful, like when you sometimes have to cut things that you really really like, because they just don't add anything useful to your story or drag things down or whatever; and exciting, because you start to see your book take shape and become something more polished and detailed and engaging than it was before.

Have fun! And I honestly applaud you for trunking it in an actual trunk--melodramatic, sure, but kind of beautiful at the same time.
 
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