Hooks from your favorite novels

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ChainsawLicker

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I'm trying to write the first line of my book, and I figured the best way to do that would be to look and see what the hooks of my favorite novels were; what got me to subconsciously move forward.

I figured this might be kind of fun for all of us to add to.


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"I'd been waiting for the vampire for years before he walked into the bar." - Dead Until Dark, Charlaine Harris (True Blood series, book 1)

"A throng of bearded men, in sad-coloured garments and grey steeple-crowned hats, inter-mixed with women, some wearing hoods, and others bareheaded, was assembled in front of a wooden edifice, the door of which was heavily timbered with oak, and studded with iron spikes." - The Scarlet Letter, Nathaniel Hawthorne

"I felt her before I heard her screams." Vampire Academy (book 1), Richelle Mead

"Station: In all the world of the drow, there is no more important word. It is the calling of their--of our--religion, the incessant pulling of hungering heartstrings. Ambition overrides good sense and compassion is thrown away in its face, all in the name of Lloth, the Spider Queen." Homeland: The Dark Elf Trilogy, R.A. Salvatore

"Dear Diary, Something awful is going to happen today." The Awakening (Vampire Diaries, book 1), L.J. Smith

"While preparing this book, I have been asked, by many skeptical people, questions like: 'How could vampires really exist?' or even, 'Are you serious?'" Vampires: The Occult Truth, Konstantinos

"The air hummed with bass guitar and rampant lust. He'd come to the right place." All I Want for Christmas is a Vampire, Kerrelyn Sparks

"About thirty years ago, Miss Maria Ward, of Huntingdon, with only seven thousand pounds, had the good luck to captivate Sir Thomas Bertram, of Mansfield Park, in the county of Northampton, and to be thereby raised to the rank of a baronet's lady, with all the comforts and consequences of an handsome house and large income." Mansfield Park, Jane Austen

"1801 - I have just returned from a visit to my landlord--the solitary neighbour that I shall be troubled with." Wuthering Heights, Emily Bronte

"The year 1866 was marked by several strange and mysterious events at sea." 20,000 Leagues Under the Sea, Jules Verne

"No one who had ever seen Catherine Morland in her infancy, would have supposed her born to be an heroine." Northanger Abbey, Jane Austen
 

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"Emma Woodhouse, handsome, clever, and rich, with a comfortable home and happy disposition, seemed to unite some of the best blessings of existence; and had lived nearly twenty-one years in the world with very little to distress or vex her."- Jane Austen's Emma

There was no possibility of taking a walk that day. Charlotte Bronte's Jane Eyre

When Mr. Bilbo Baggins of Bag End announced that he would shortly be celebrating his eleventy-first birthday with a party of special magnificence, there was much talk and excitement in Hobbiton.- JRR Tolkien's The Lord of the Rings
 

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I love studying first sentences. A good first sentence is like the book in pill form, giving you a hint of the style and what you're in for.

"We were somewhere around Barstow on the edge of the desert when the drugs began to take hold." Fear and Loathing in Las Vegas

"I first heard Personville called Poisonville by a red-haired mucker named Hickey Dewey in the Big Ship in Butte." Red Harvest by Dashiell Hammet.

I'm too lazy to type up the entire first sentence of 'Midnight in the Garden of Good and Evil', but during it the narrator describes a character as having eyes like the tinted windows of a limousine-"he could see out but you couldn't see in."
 

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Lolita, light of my life, fire of my loins. My sin, my soul. Lo-lee-ta: the tip of the tongue taking a trip of three steps down the palate to tap at three on the teeth. Lo. Lee. Tah.

She was Lo, plain Lo in the morning, standing four feet ten in one sock. She was Lola in slacks. She was Dolly in school. She was Dolores on the dotted line. But in my arms, she was always Lolita.

--Lolita, Vladimir Nabokov

When you read that, you know you're in for some good language-wranglin'.
 

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oh, what a fun thread!
a few of my favorites have already been mentioned. here are a couple more:

"Mr. & Mrs. Dursley, of number four, Privet Drive were proud to say that they were perfectly normal, thank you very much."
-Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone (J.K. Rowling)

"Far out in the unchartered backwaters of the unfashionable end of the Western Spiral arm of the Galaxy lies a small unregarded yellow sun."
-The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy (Douglas Adams)

"Early this morning, 1 January 2021, three minutes after midnight, the last human being to be born on earth was killed in a pub brawl in a suburb of Buenos Aires, ages twenty-five years, two months and twelve days."
-The Children of Men (PD James)


this was a fun exercise, because i realized a few of my favorite books (On the Road, One Flew Over the Cuckoo's Nest, The Great Gatsby) don't actually have first lines that hook me. hm. interesting. :)
 

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Stately, plump Buck Mulligan came from the stairhead, bearing a bowl of lather on which a mirror and a razor lay crossed. A yellow dressing-gown, ungirdled, was sustained gently behind him by the mild morning air. He held the bowl aloft and intoned:

- Introibo ad altare Dei.

James Joyce - Ulysses


'To be born again,' sang Gibreel Farishta tumbling from the heavens, 'first you have to die. Ho ji! Ho ji! To land upon the bosomy earth, first one needs to fly. Tat-taa! Taka-thun! How to ever smile again, if first you won't cry? How to win the darling's love, mister, without a sigh? Baba, if you want to get born again ...' Just before dawn one winter's morning, New Year's Day or thereabouts, two real, full-grown, living men fell from a great height, twenty-nine thousand and two feet, towards the English Channel, without benefit of parachutes or wings, out of a clear sky.

Salman Rushdie - The Satanic Verses
 

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Last night I dreamt I went to Manderley again.

Rebecca - Daphne du Maurier.
 

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-- The Blind Assassin, Margaret Atwood
 

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... hate opening hooks in books. I like to ease into stories, gradually.* That's just me, though. Most readers adore hooks, judging by what's on the shelves.

* Example of the sort of opening I like:
Mr Hackett turned the corner and saw , in the failing light, at some little distance, his seat.
From "Watt," by Samuel Beckett.
 
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Mr Hackett turned the corner and saw, in the failing light, at some little distance, his seat.

Ken: I'd say that's a damn good hook, if you will
 

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Libbie, You and I are one regarding Lolita.

I love those lines.
 

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It was love at first sight.

The first time Yossarian saw the chaplain he fell madly in love with him.

Yossarian was in the hospital with a pain in his liver that fell short of being jaundice. The doctors were puzzled by the fact that it wasn't quite jaundice. If it became jaundice they could treat it. If it didn't become jaundice and went away they could discharge him. But this just being short of jaundice all the time confused them.

ETA: Sorry, that's Catch-22 by Heller
 

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Another thread reminded me of one of the best paras in English literature...

"Choose life. Choose a job. Choose a career. Choose a family. Choose a fucking big television, choose washing machines, cars, compact disc players and electrical tin openers. Choose good health, low cholesterol, and dental insurance. Choose fixed interest mortgage repayments. Choose a starter home. Choose your friends. Choose leisurewear and matching luggage. Choose a three-piece suit on hire purchase in a range of fucking fabrics. Choose DIY and wondering who the fuck you are on Sunday night. Choose sitting on that couch watching mind-numbing, spirit-crushing game shows, stuffing fucking junk food into your mouth. Choose rotting away at the end of it all, pissing your last in a miserable home, nothing more than an embarrassment to the selfish, fucked up brats you spawned to replace yourselves. Choose your future. Choose life . . . But why would I want to do a thing like that? I chose not to choose life. I chose somethin' else. And the reasons? There are no reasons. Who needs reasons when you've got heroin?"
-- Irvine Welsh, Trainspotting.

Libbie already mentioned Nabokov, so this is my contribution.
 

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The Trainspotting and Rebecca openings are two of my favorites.

I also remember reading somewhere that Nabokov said he thought he was primarily responsible for "Lolita" no longer being a popular name for parents to give to their daughters...
 

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I love Rebecca's opening line.

How did this not get through?

'It is a truth universally acknowledged that a young man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife.' - Jane Austen, Pride and Prejudice

'The year that Buttercup was born, the most beautiful woman in the world was a French scullery maid named Annette.' - The Princess Bride, William Goldman (Even funnier than the film!)

'The artist is the creator of beautiful things.' - The Picture of Dorian Gray, Oscar Wilde

'When he was thirteen my brother Jem got his arm badly broken at the elbow.' - To Kill a Mockingbird, Harper Lee
 

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"The sky the port was the color of television, tuned to a dead channel.
'It's not like I'm using,' Case heard someone say, as he shouldered his way through the crowd around the door to the chat. 'It's like my body's developed this massive drug deficiency.'"

Neuromancer, William Gibson.

Another thread reminded me of one of the best
paras in English literature...

"Choose life. Choose a job. Choose a career. Choose a family. Choose a fucking big television, choose washing machines, cars, compact disc players and electrical tin openers. Choose good health, low cholesterol, and dental insurance. Choose fixed interest mortgage repayments. Choose a starter home. Choose your friends. Choose leisurewear and matching luggage. Choose a three-piece suit on hire purchase in a range of fucking fabrics. Choose DIY and wondering who the fuck you are on Sunday night. Choose sitting on that couch watching mind-numbing, spirit-crushing game shows, stuffing fucking junk food into your mouth. Choose rotting away at the end of it all, pissing your last in a miserable home, nothing more than an embarrassment to the selfish, fucked up brats you spawned to replace yourselves. Choose your future. Choose life . . . But why would I want to do a thing like that? I chose not to choose life. I chose somethin' else. And the reasons? There are no reasons. Who needs reasons when you've got heroin?"
-- Irvine Welsh, Trainspotting.

It sounds even better coming out of a young Ewan MacGregor. :D
 
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