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I am currently writing a fantasy novel which is the first part of a trilogy. But I understand publishers, as a general rule, look for stand-alone novels when it comes to first time authors, so I’m trying to make my manuscript as stand-alone as possible.

What I’m wondering is, can it still have obvious loose ends, things that lead on to the next book, or does everything have to be wrapped up? Its ending returns the protagonist to the equilibrium she lost in the first place, but to get to that point she has to make a choice – a kind of ‘Y’ intersection in her path, so to speak. One direction leads to the resolution she’s been trying to achieve from the beginning of her dilemma, the other to equally important, unresolved issues she’s inadvertently developed along the way (book II). There’s only room for one choice, and it makes sense in the story-line that she would be confronted with such a situation, but her decision (which she agonizes over) leaves an obvious question as to what happens on the other path.

Does that sound too un-stand-alone?
 
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No, it sounds pretty good, although you can’t say for sure without having read the entire story. As long as you fulfill your “promises” to the reader, ie, answer enough of the questions you asked near the beginning of the book, and provide a sense of resolution to at least the majority of the original conflicts, you ought to be okay.
 

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Stand-alones are easy to make into series.
A series is difficult to make into a stand-alone.
 

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My approach is loosely connected standalones, much like David Gemmell's Drenai books. Same world, overlapping history, but not a single unified story arc across multiple novels.

There's also the Steven Brust approach to writing novels about the same people and places that have enough story to stand alone, with interspersed bits that tell a much broader story (in this case non-sequentially).
 

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Just don't kill off too many characters!

Or, at least, don't kill them off permanently. :)
You mean death isn't permanent?! :eek:

Most often, I've seen something that's originally a stand alone, but then has two sequels produced afterwords; the sequels usually link up to one another, with the same problem, but different from the first book, which had it's own problem that was solved within the first novel.
 

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Each book in a series should stand alone. However, it's expected that in such a series, the same characters (most if not all of them) appear in the same (or similar) settings in each volume.

And it's expected that to obtain the highest enjoyment of reading the series, they should be read in the order the author intended (not all series are written in the same chronological order as the story).

But as mentioned above, your chances of selling the story to a publisher are orders of magnitude greater if you propose the project as "a novel, complete, with possible sequels in the works."

Good luck. :)
 

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Thanks all for your replies and the links. I think I’m a little better educated on trilogy etiquette now. It’s looking OK for the book I’m working on, but I’m thinking maybe my planned second book might need some changes if I ever make it as far as writing the thing. The way I was intending to have it structured, it would have made little sense without the reader having first read book I, which apparently is not the way to go. Looks like it too has to be a stand alone. But that’s no big concern just yet, of course.
You mean death isn't permanent?! :eek:
This is fantasy.
 

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This always confuses me.
How the heck can an author know that story X is a "trilogy"? If you split it by 500 page chunks, maybe it's a 4 book series. If you split it by 1000 page chunks, maybe it's one damn book. The real question is,
a)Are you writing 3 stories under 1 arc?
b)Or are you writing 1 story?
c)Or are you writing 3 separate stories?

My advice, in any case, is to write A story. If it is too long, you can decide (or the agent/publisher will help you decide) how to split it. Setting out to write A trilogy specifically in my opinion, is silly. Unless you're an experienced/published author already in which case you already know what makes sense from a marketing perspective.

Sorry if this sounds like a rant (which it is, in part, since nothing pisses me off more as a reader/buyer when I see yet another god damn Book I in NEW AWESOME SUPER RAD YET UNFINISHED TRILOGY from author I don't know).
 

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My advice to you: Make your own path. JR Rowling was beginner, and she did not start out with a stand alone. I am a novise too, and I am writing a trillogy, because my character will not accept anything less. making my main character less, is hurting the story. Believe in yourself, dont let an editor stand in your way.
 

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This always confuses me.
How the heck can an author know that story X is a "trilogy"? If you split it by 500 page chunks, maybe it's a 4 book series. If you split it by 1000 page chunks, maybe it's one damn book. The real question is,
a)Are you writing 3 stories under 1 arc?
b)Or are you writing 1 story?
c)Or are you writing 3 separate stories?
I've wondered that too, like with King's Dark Towers series, how did he know would write 7 books (he says there might be more). That's one hell of a long story!

I guess it's the author's love for the characters, continually generating new storylines and plots to place them in. Although Herbert's Dune series didn't have the same characters in each book (they only stuck around for maaaaaybe two books before the cast was changed), so in that case, the series was set in the same universe and he kept rehashing the dune name, but the any established character never stuck around.

Hmm... there's so many ways to go about a series.
 

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This always confuses me.
How the heck can an author know that story X is a "trilogy"?

Honestly, I think a lot of the "I'm writing a trilogy" decisions come from looking at what's popular in fantasy and what other authors have done. Folks love to use Tolkien as an example (even though LOTR wasn't technically a trilogy, but we have bukoo threads on the topic, so let's not debate that here). You can also look at new authors like Brent Weeks who've had success with trilogies.

Thing is, though, they are HARD TO SELL. Any book by a new author is a risky investment for a publisher. There's no guarantee the first book in the contract will sell.

In a standalone series, if the first book doesn't sell and the publisher terminates the contract (rare, but it happens), readers aren't left as bereft without the rest of the books. If you only get books one and two, say, of a planned trilogy, then the third is canceled for bad numbers, you'll have a few pissed off readers (this happened recently, but for the life of me I can't remember the author).

JR Rowling was beginner, and she did not start out with a stand alone.

Actually, she did. Would the story arc have felt as complete had books 2-7 never been published? Impossible to say. Sure, book one had open threads and possibilities of continuation (that's what a good, standalone, first book in a series does), but if all we'd ever gotten was the first book, it would have stood alone just fine.
 

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My advice to you: Make your own path. JR Rowling was beginner, and she did not start out with a stand alone.

Her first novel stood alone quite well. Each of the books has its own arc, and adds to the arc of the entire series. I think hers is a good example. Make the first book a satisfying read in its own right.
 

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I've wondered that too, like with King's Dark Towers series, how did he know would write 7 books (he says there might be more). That's one hell of a long story!

It's worth noting that King started writing the first book very early in his career. It didn't get published as a novel until after he sold several standalone novels, and after they became huge bestsellers. At the time The Gunslinger was published as a novel, it had already been published as a series of short stories, and had established an audience for the world and characters.
 

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The advice I've always heard is that if you're writing a Fantasy trilogy (like LOTR--one big storyin 3 books), then you finish the entire thing before attempting to market any of it.

If you're not writing a Fantasy trilogy, then each book should contain a complete story, even if that story can or is planned to be part of a larger story arc going into other books. Then you can market the first book when it's done.

The challenge is that, even if you sell the first book in a planned series--and the publisher is interested in the series--whenever the numbers tank, the series ends. Even just after the first book. (I have a friend who signed a multiple book contract and the first one tanked so bad they canceled the rest of the contract.) There's no guarantee in the numbers game.

OTOH, if you have a standalone and it's suddenly popular, you'll be pressed to write more in the series. This happened with Dune, IIRC. Herbert had no plans for a series, but a new Dune book would pay better and/or he couldn't sell a different book without piggybacking it with a new Dune book in the contract. So it's not bad to have a standalone with room to grow into a series. (I have another friend who sold her first book and it was popular enough the publisher pressed her into a series that she didn't plan for, which ruined the series and almost tanked her career.)

Personally, I think ahead, but I don't plan ahead. I don't plan on writing a series or a trilogy because I want all the good ideas and focus to be in THIS book and not to make it set-up for the NEXT book, which I may never get to get to. That doesn't mean that I'm not aware of what could be spun into a sequel, should that be desired.
 
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My advice to you: Make your own path. JR Rowling was beginner, and she did not start out with a stand alone. I am a novise too, and I am writing a trillogy, because my character will not accept anything less. making my main character less, is hurting the story. Believe in yourself, dont let an editor stand in your way.

Nobody’s suggesting you make your character “less”, whatever that means. They’re just saying that because everyone other aspiring author and their grandma is writing a trilogy, that doesn’t mean you have to or you should. Obviosuly you could. It’s not like the Novel Police(NoPo) are going to come to your house and put your masterwork through the shredder.

The way to decide whether you’re writing a trilogy is not to say, “I’m going to write a trilogy. Now, what will it be about?” It’s to write the story you want to write. Then, once it is done, you can look back and say “Gosh, this looks like it might work better as a trilogy than a single book.” Or, your editor might say: “Wow, that first book sold a lot of copies…” or “We really like this…” “…Maybe it could use some sequels."
 

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The way to decide whether you’re writing a trilogy is not to say, “I’m going to write a trilogy. Now, what will it be about?” It’s to write the story you want to write. Then, once it is done, you can look back and say “Gosh, this looks like it might work better as a trilogy than a single book.”

Bingo. Well stated. :)
 

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We've had threads on this before. My opinion is still identical to MattW's: standalones are best, and I appreciate seeing standalones set in the same secondary world with no intervolume continuity. Unfortunately, few writers do this. Multibook continuities are practically standard in f/sf, and the financial allure is undeniable. That's my opinion as a reader.

As a writer, I'll do whatever I have to do.
 
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I've wondered that too, like with King's Dark Towers series, how did he know would write 7 books (he says there might be more). That's one hell of a long story!

I think it's pretty simple, really. Your character has goals, throughout the entire series. Many people only plan three main goals to do trilogies because that's what they believe is popular/expected. With near flawless outlining, it's really easy to see exactly where you're going for the entirety of the series, not just the book.
 
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I think it's pretty simple, really. Your character has goals, throughout the entire series. Many people only plan three main goals to do trilogies because that's what they believe is popular/expected. With near flawless outlining, it's really easy to see exactly where you're going for the entirety of the series, not just the book.

You're giving planning way too much credit. “No outline survives the first draft."

Okay, that’s an exaggeration, but the more books you have, the more likely this is to happen.

“Near-flawless outlining?” Ideals, ideals.
 

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You're giving planning way too much credit. “No outline survives the first draft."

Okay, that’s an exaggeration, but the more books you have, the more likely this is to happen.

“Near-flawless outlining?” Ideals, ideals.
I have to agree with that, at least for beginner writers at any rate. It’s how I got into this whole trilogy mess in the first place. What originally seemed to me to be “near-flawless outlining” ended up with unforseen complications when I got to writing it. And unforseen complications, unfortunately, added unforseen word count. And my solution for unforseen word count was a ‘trilogy’. If I had realized beginner writers and a belief in “flawless outlining” was akin to a learner driver taking a cocktail of drugs before settling before the wheel, I wouldn’t be trying to write my way out of the mess I’m in.
 

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SoloArtist - If the pregnancy is an attempt at ending the book on cliffhanger, don't do it. Leave it off, end the book. If you sell it and your editor wants a sequel/series, then it's a good time to say, "Well, I have this idea to tweak the end of book one..."
 
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