Quick Question For The Audience . . . .

Thinking ahead, as usual, here. I was thinking about something for when I get to 'Kimberly: Part Two', which follows Kim through her transition into the vyca collective.

So, how important to you think it is that I capture the exact moment when Kim goes from her singular mind to a part of the vyca collective mind? What I mean is: If you're reading the scene, would it be important to you to be able to discern the exact moment when it happens? Or would you be okay with knowing at the end of the scene that it's happened, but not necessarily when in that scene that it's happened?

And, by "capture," I don't mean to make an announcement. I'm talking about just doing something with the narration - most likely some kind of internal dialog, but I'm not completely certain yet how I could do it - to where, should the reader be so inclined, they could study the scene closely and find the moment the change occurs.

What do you think? It's not vital story information, really. The scene is obvious, and the vital information is just that the change has occurred. I'm wondering if readers want to be able to pinpoint it.

As usual, and always, thanks in advance.

Yes, that's definitely part of the plan - and it's not just her internal dialog that makes that change. (Also, if it matters to you, this is narrated in a close third person. I wouldn't want to even attempt to narrate this in first person. )

I'm curious if readers need to know the precise moment that this change happens within her - and understand this is only a part of the overall transition, which is going to take somewhere between 16-24 hours, but it's the most significant part - or if the reader will be comfortable just knowing that it happened somewhere in the scene the just read.

Am I making sense? I know it's kind of a confusing topic.