Hi,
I would like to request a beta reader for my novel, "Deceit of the Eyes". This novel is geared more towards teens/young adults, so I'd prefer if my beta was from that age category, but they do not have to be. Also, I'd prefer a beta who has some experience writing novels.
Here is the summary of my novel:
Camille Hayden dreamed of being a detective ever since she was just eleven years old. Now, seventeen years later, she gets the chance to fulfill that dream, but it isn't going to be as easy as she had hoped.
There's a serial killer running around the northeastern United States, and what's puzzling this team of Crime Scene Investigators in Philadelphia is how difficult they are to profile. The Ghost Killer is a mastermind, because every time the team finds a new victim, everything about them seems to disappear from every computer system in the US government. And what's worse: This killer's main goal seems to be nothing less than to erase Camille Hayden - as well as the rest of the team.
My novel is about 62k words long. I've gone through a good bit of editing so far, but it isn't quite perfect (and I'm a perfectionist). What I'm looking for is some feedback, and tips on how I can improve it as far as the plot and grammar go. I can take criticism, but preferably constructive.
I would like to request a beta reader for my novel, "Deceit of the Eyes". This novel is geared more towards teens/young adults, so I'd prefer if my beta was from that age category, but they do not have to be. Also, I'd prefer a beta who has some experience writing novels.
Here is the summary of my novel:
Camille Hayden dreamed of being a detective ever since she was just eleven years old. Now, seventeen years later, she gets the chance to fulfill that dream, but it isn't going to be as easy as she had hoped.
There's a serial killer running around the northeastern United States, and what's puzzling this team of Crime Scene Investigators in Philadelphia is how difficult they are to profile. The Ghost Killer is a mastermind, because every time the team finds a new victim, everything about them seems to disappear from every computer system in the US government. And what's worse: This killer's main goal seems to be nothing less than to erase Camille Hayden - as well as the rest of the team.
My novel is about 62k words long. I've gone through a good bit of editing so far, but it isn't quite perfect (and I'm a perfectionist). What I'm looking for is some feedback, and tips on how I can improve it as far as the plot and grammar go. I can take criticism, but preferably constructive.
