Does this sound like a dumb idea?

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My Dad has passed down his passion for music to me and I can't help but think of songs that match the mood of an event or particular chapter in my story...

What do you guys think of naming the chapters each the title of a song? For example...

Chapter One: Easier To Run
Chapter Two: Are You Happy Now

Blah blah blah...

(In case you were wondering, Easier To Run = Linkin Park... Are You Happy Now = Michelle Branch.)

I wouldn't name the artists or anything, but it's something the reader doesn't even really need to know... or something they can figure out later...
 

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Nope, it doesn't sound dumb to me at all. I had tinkered with the idea in my UF The Guardians, but I didn't end up doing it. I've always thought it would be cool, and it seems like one YA Contemp author did it...well, Ann Brashares Sisterhood of the Traveling Pants has a version of that with Song lyrics, poems, etc.
 

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Not only have I done that for a particular WIP, but it really helped me when editing. I make soundtracks for every novel, and the chapter names matched up to the soundtrack order. If I needed to find a scene, it was easy to go through Document Map, find the right song, and go straight to the right chapter.
 

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I do that for my Urban Fantasy series. Blues artists make for some great inspiration.


I have a soundtrack for every series that I write. Music really helps.
 

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I think it's something to be VERY careful with. If it's a story about music, or music is central to the story, then it could work, but if it's not, then you run the risk of a) seeming derivative b) distracting people from your work c) inflaming people's music tastes ("she listens to what?") and d) laying on the table too clearly how people are supposed to feel about certain scenes.

Personally, I'd discourage you from doing it.
 

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The Supernatural TV show has numerous episodes named after songs, usually in a tongue-in-cheek way. I think it adds character.

I don't think it would detract from the mood or put pressure on the reader. It's just a chapter name. Anything that isn't "Chapter One, in which Mr. Anderson learns an important lesson" is good in my book.
 
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It's fine. But if the songs are all popular songs of this very moment, it might date your novel. That's not necessarily a bad thing; I've read many YA novels full of trends and catchy fads that were *very* current when I read the book...but in five years, they'll seem dated.

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Would you have to also put the artist down as well? Or can you leave it just as the title.
 

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Sounds like a fun idea, as long as you don't actually quote lyrics. Quoting lyrics, even just a line or two, requires a substantial payment to the song's publisher.
 

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Karen Healey's done that with Guardian of the Dead, with the twist being they're all New Zealand songs (GotD is NZ urban fantasy). I liked it then, and I'll like it again.


In a non-book context, True Blood has each episode named after a song that features in it.
 

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Karen Healey's done that with Guardian of the Dead, with the twist being they're all New Zealand songs (GotD is NZ urban fantasy). I liked it then, and I'll like it again.


In a non-book context, True Blood has each episode named after a song that features in it.

'Gossip Girl" does the same thing with book titles.
 

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My Dad has passed down his passion for music to me and I can't help but think of songs that match the mood of an event or particular chapter in my story...

What do you guys think of naming the chapters each the title of a song? For example...

Chapter One: Easier To Run
Chapter Two: Are You Happy Now

Blah blah blah...

(In case you were wondering, Easier To Run = Linkin Park... Are You Happy Now = Michelle Branch.)

I wouldn't name the artists or anything, but it's something the reader doesn't even really need to know... or something they can figure out later...

For a reader who's not into music written after 1750, the significance would be completely lost.
 

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I think it's something to be VERY careful with. If it's a story about music, or music is central to the story, then it could work, but if it's not, then you run the risk of a) seeming derivative b) distracting people from your work c) inflaming people's music tastes ("she listens to what?") and d) laying on the table too clearly how people are supposed to feel about certain scenes.

Personally, I'd discourage you from doing it.

It would be the equivalent of a baroque and renaissance music freak giving names to chapters such as: Sonata K 517, or Capriccio Obligo di Cantare la Quinta Parte and expecting people to somehow "get it".
 

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I don't thinks so, Rufus. If people don't "get it" then they don't get it. You don't think people can infer a meaning from "Are You Happy Now?" even if they don't know the song.

If a baroque and renaissance music freak was writing something about the baroque and renaissance periods, then I imagine that the book would be read by others interested in those times, so they'd either know the songs, or they would be interested in learning about them. If not, then they miss out on the added layer the title brings (because I assume the title does bring an added layer and relates to the chapter)

As a teen (even as an adult), I would probably eat this up. I'd start out recognizing a few song titles. I'd look at the other chapter titles and see if I recognize any more. The ones I don't recognize, I'd look up to see if I could see a deeper meaning in that chapter.

But then again, I create soundtracks for my novels, and derive meaning from playlists that some authors put in their YA novels these days. Some people, I'm sure, don't.
 
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