Straight for a Day, What do you think?

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GonnaBeFamous

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I jut came up with an idea for a new comedy in about 30 seconds.

A guy's gay friend bets with his straight friend that he can get more phone numbers from women then he can. LOL
 

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Fabulous! What lessons would you have the characters learn by the end of the film? I think the gay guy could realize he loves chicks, and the straight dude finds out he loves dudes.

oR YA know what!?! cause i dont
 

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Isn't very compelling. Nor is there much potential for comedy. Sounds more like a short joke, with a pretty unfunny punchline, that would take place in a bar and not take more than 5 minutes. It's not the basis for an entire movie.

At least not an entertaining one.

Most gay guys (of the non-totally-flaming type) could get more girls' digits than a straight guy...unless the straight guy were Brad Pitt, Matthew McConaughey, or Colin Farrel.

This is pretty much common knowledge.

However, it might actually be interesting to turn it around and make the straight guy a total homophone and have him feel that his masculinity has somehow been insulted by the gay guy...or maybe the gay guy has a really hot friend whom the straight guy wants to be hooked up with....and then have the straight guy bet the gay guy that he (straight guy) can get more dudes' numbers than the gay guy can (over the span of, say, a month). If he wins, he gets hooked up with the girl...or whatever.

The comedy, then, would come from the homophobic straight guy having to learn to overcome his "fears of queers" and relate to gays better.

Within this journey lies his lesson...to become more sensitive/compassionate. By learning to relate more to gay men, he, in turn, learns how to better relate to women (and people in general).

At the end, he wins the girl...but...as a twist, you should make the girl turn out to be a tranny.

Actually, this sounds like a decent idea now that I've played with it.


I'm going to write the script now and send it to IWrite by next week.

Thanks....SUCKER!!!!



(I'm only joking, of course....sort of).
 

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An original idea, but rather tacky, IMO. But I don't speak for everybody.
 

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Opti!
Where ya been? Missed ya.
I'm afraid Iwrite has left us. Good to see you're still kicking around.

I like your concept much better than the other, which I thought could work as a short, but impossible to keep interest going past 10 minutes.
 

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Optimus said:
Isn't very compelling. Nor is there much potential for comedy. Sounds more like a short joke, with a pretty unfunny punchline, that would take place in a bar and not take more than 5 minutes. It's not the basis for an entire movie.

At least not an entertaining one.

Most gay guys (of the non-totally-flaming type) could get more girls' digits than a straight guy...unless the straight guy were Brad Pitt, Matthew McConaughey, or Colin Farrel.

This is pretty much common knowledge.

However, it might actually be interesting to turn it around and make the straight guy a total homophone and have him feel that his masculinity has somehow been insulted by the gay guy...or maybe the gay guy has a really hot friend whom the straight guy wants to be hooked up with....and then have the straight guy bet the gay guy that he (straight guy) can get more dudes' numbers than the gay guy can (over the span of, say, a month). If he wins, he gets hooked up with the girl...or whatever.

The comedy, then, would come from the homophobic straight guy having to learn to overcome his "fears of queers" and relate to gays better.

Within this journey lies his lesson...to become more sensitive/compassionate. By learning to relate more to gay men, he, in turn, learns how to better relate to women (and people in general).

At the end, he wins the girl...but...as a twist, you should make the girl turn out to be a tranny.

Actually, this sounds like a decent idea now that I've played with it.


I'm going to write the script now and send it to IWrite by next week.

Thanks....SUCKER!!!!



(I'm only joking, of course....sort of).


ROFLMAO, actually thats what I intended, the guy learns feels insecure when he loses or even wilder the other version, but I hadn't thought of that yet becasue I hadn't though too much about the concept yet. If I was really worried I would have not even mentioned it on public forum so you guys cans teal my ideas. ;)
 
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Joe Calabrese said:
Opti!
Where ya been? Missed ya.
I'm afraid Iwrite has left us. Good to see you're still kicking around.

I like your concept much better than the other, which I thought could work as a short, but impossible to keep interest going past 10 minutes.

You don't think the straight guy having to get more numbers then the other one of guys could be a full fledged movie? I'm not even creative and I could type up a script pretty easily for this movie.
 

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Ooooo! Ooooo!

I got an idea!

How about we have our own Absoloute Write Idol Screenwriting Only Competition.

You (and anyone who wants to enter) write the first 10 pages. Due on August 3rd. I'll create a thread for entries to be posted in.

Concept. A straight, homophobic man must put his fears aside for a chance at true love, when he bets with a gay man, that he can get more phone numbers from men than the gay man could. His prize? A hookup with the gay man's best friend, a girl that would make Aphrodite jealous.

Everyone votes by PMing me no later than August 10th, midnight.

Who ever wins, gets to write the script and a special prize from me (trust me, you'll like it.)

Whatta think?
 

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Joe Calabrese said:
Ooooo! Ooooo!

I got an idea!

How about we have our own Absoloute Write Idol Screenwriting Only Competition.

You (and anyone who wants to enter) write the first 10 pages. Due on August 3rd. I'll create a thread for entries to be posted in.

Concept. A straight, homophobic man must put his fears aside for a chance at true love, when he bets with a gay man, that he can get more phone numbers from men than the gay man could. His prize? A hookup with the gay man's best friend, a girl that would make Aphrodite jealous.

Everyone votes by PMing me no later than August 10th, midnight.

Who ever wins, gets to write the script and a special prize from me (trust me, you'll like it.)

Whatta think?


OK i didn't see this until after I sent you the pm Joe.
 

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It sounds exciting to do the script, but I was thinking of doing this ohhhh about 18 months. ;) I'm just working on too many things simultaneously right now.

Joe do I have a creative mind to come up with this idea? Please tell me I'm creative, I need to know from the approval of a established writer. LOL
 

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18 months?

Just the first 10 pages in a week.

As for whether you have creativity. We'll see after the first 10 pages. Anyone can come up with an idea. Talent comes in the execution.

Could end up as bad as Cuba Gooding Jr's Gay Cruise film.
 

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Joe Calabrese said:
18 months?

Just the first 10 pages in a week.

As for whether you have creativity. We'll see after the first 10 pages. Anyone can come up with an idea. Talent comes in the execution.

Could end up as bad as Cuba Gooding Jr's Gay Cruise film.

I thought the exaggerations on that one were lame too.

No way i could compete with other guys who are working on the same idea. I have to come with a creative idea that no one else could and hope it makes up for my mediocre writing. :D
 

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I just need time to nurture my ideas and do rewrites. This is a heavily dialogue movie and i'm not a creative as others so it would take me more time. I think I could do the first 10 pages easily, but I just can't compare with others in the same time frame.
 

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Joe Calabrese said:
You must concentrate more at how your hand passes through the wind and not wonder if the trees do the same, but better.

Grasshopper.

If I lose though my 10 pages was wasted even though I came up with the idea. :(

At least on my other project i learn from my writing, but don't lose anything since i have a full script.
 

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Joe,

Are you being serious?

Sometimes it's hard to tell when you're joking...

or not joking. :)


Steph
 

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:eek: The competition.

Sorry about the confusion.

Gonnabefamous,

I thought your idea was good for coming up with it in a matter of seconds. What you do with it next depends on wether or not it will work. I thought Opti's ideas were good. Play with them, see what you come up with. Could make for a very funny film. :)

Steph
 

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Yeah, I would have thought of Opti's idea's eventually probably, I just hadn't had time to figure out different possibilities.

The thing is it's a competition and there is more then one personworking on MY idea i started. Doesn't sound inspiring to me at all, especialy knowing that since I don't have the god given talent I have to use my blood sweat and tears to make even a acceptable screenplay, so no way I could compete with others in the same time frame. :(
 

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GBF,

Don't be so hard on yourself. You obviously think you have the talent, otherwise you wouldn't be here. Since I haven't read any of your work yet, I can't vouch for that. But your enthusiasm makes me enthusiastic. Believe in yourself and you will go far. :Sun:

As for Joe's idea. I'm still not sure if he was serious or not. But if he is, I think another concept would work just as well. It's your idea, go for it!

Steph
 
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