Fantasy: Avoiding cliches?

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I've read a ton of fantasy novels. I enjoy them, but there's a lot of overlapping ideas. Some of these ideas seem to move from the realm of "trope" into "cliche."

Personally, I'm usually fine with reading "cliches" as long as the writing is interesting. Chosen ones, Tolkienesque elves, half-whatevers, secret heritage, old wizards, and the like are all fine with me. I read 17 of David Eddings' books, most of R.A. Salvatore's stuff, and even got to book 8 of Wheel of Time before finally giving up. (Not because of cliches, but because it took too long for anything to happen, and because too many main characters were becoming unsympathetic.)

When it comes to writing, though, I'm trying to avoid cliches. The problem is that I'm used to writing non-fiction, and whenever I try to avoid too many cliches in fantasy, I end up with a boring, anti-climatic storyline with characters I have no interest in. (Oddly enough, looking at that little tongue-in-cheek "cliche checklist" in one of the Stickied threads, my current story doesn't really violate any of them, but I don't think that means anything. It's more of a joke list than anything else.)

The problem is that I like fantasy for a reason. Even though my preferences are outside the mainstream, I still like to have the occasional "evil artifact," "crazed wizard," or vampire. (My crazed wizard acts more like the Joker than Saruman, but he's still a crazed wizard.) Cutting out every possible cliche seems to leave nothing that qualifies it as "fantasy" anymore. Even worse, the "weird idea thrown in to avoid cliches" has become a cliche in itself. (At this point, I'd rather see Tolkien races than the Apo'stro'ph'e, the 10,000th psionic insectoid race to show up in fantasy while the author congratulates himself on his originality. And really weird races often lead to infodumps, because there's no basis of familiarity for the readers, although I don't think that's mandatory. Some authors pull this off very well.)

So, what's the solution here? Does every new story with a dragon have to define "dragon" as a giant, acid-breathing spider with bat wings, who kidnaps maidens in order to lay her eggs in them? Where's the middle ground?
 

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My own preference is just to find good writing that tells a good story, cliches be damned. Cliches become that way for a reason, people like them. A badly told story is just that, regardless of how original the plot is and how creative the author gets with their world building details.

What do YOU like? If you like vampires, write about them. If you like prophecies, write that too. Writing about something you don't care about or even hate is going to destroy your work a lot more completely than inserting an element people consider cliche.
 

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Read as many books as you can (which you already have), research things until your mind explodes (which I'd guess you've already done), study the craft from every conceivable fashion, and then write from the heart while pulling no punches. Don't worry about the rest. IMO
 

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Don't compare and contrast your WIP against TV Tropes while you are writing. Avoiding tropes is a trope in itself. :)
 

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A trope becomes a cliché when it stands in place of a decent story. A good story is a good story. Tell a good story, and use any trope you like that serves the story well. If you can give it a unique twist, so much the better.
 

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So, what's the solution here? Does every new story with a dragon have to define "dragon" as a giant, acid-breathing spider with bat wings, who kidnaps maidens in order to lay her eggs in them? Where's the middle ground?

That sounds like the bastard offspring of Shelob and Cthulhu. :)

Now, to be serious: don't worry about avoiding cliches and tropes. Just write the story you want to write. Once you've gotten the story down, then you can look at it and tinker with it to see if you refine it until it can't be recognized as anything but something you made. And take your time doing it. It took me a decade to iron out the obvious influences that made my own WIP a pastiche instead of an original work.
 

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I'm not a fan of any hard and fast rules. It's like Goldilocks, a certain amount of familiarity doesn't hurt, as long as it's balanced with something very creative. When I read "A horse and his boy"- I think that was one of the Narnia names, it had so many elements from other stories, including Twain's Prince and the Pauper. But it was still good and I enjoyed it.

There's a reason why great books are great. We recognize something. But great books add a twist or ten to the familiar pot.

When it comes to some authors losing steam, I think it's a gamble to try to stretch out a story too far. It's easier to build upon a familiar world, but it's like a sitcom. After so many seasons you've seen every twist and scenario, and everything starts to sound repetitive. A reader will be a step ahead of the writer, because he's learned his style and how his mind works, which is never good.
 

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Even Tolkien got ideas from other places. Would there be 'Tolkien elves' without the De Danann of Irish folk lore? Gandalf looks like Odin, with both eyes. The names of the dwarfs in The Hobbit come right out of Norse literature.
I wouldn't worry about it. Judg is right, "A good story is a good story". Just let it happen.
 

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Joe Abercrombie went out of his way to avoid all the clichés that he felt were littering the fantasy genre. That's why he wrote THE FIRST LAW trilogy and that's why dark fantasy has suddenly exploded in popularity (well, as far as I understand it, anyway).

I didn't really get on with THE BLADE ITSELF, though. Whilst I found both the writing and the prose excellent, I had problems finding the story. I was waiting for quest to start, the adventure to kick into high gear. It felt as if, however, that the characters in the book were simply going through the motions of their daily lives, and I stopped more or less halfway through.
 

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Also, keep in mind that there is a new reader born every second, and they don't even know what cliche is :)

Mostly, your goal is to separate yourself from the mass of stories coming to agents and editors every day, that may have ideas similar to your work.

I don't give a crap if your story is cliche, just give me a reason to read YOUR story instead of 100000 others in same genre, or in similar setting, or featuring a lost heir to the throne, or featuring a ragged half-elf.
 
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Even Tolkien got ideas from other places. Would there be 'Tolkien elves' without the De Danann of Irish folk lore? Gandalf looks like Odin, with both eyes. The names of the dwarfs in The Hobbit come right out of Norse literature.
I wouldn't worry about it. Judg is right, "A good story is a good story". Just let it happen.

I'm pretty sure Tolkien's elves came from Norse folklore. But otherwise, good point.
 

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So, what's the solution here?

I have to say, everyone has given you great advice that I'm not going to repeat.

Aside from what others have said, I've found a fun way to create some of the characters you speak of. So many people start off with the idea of their story in a billion different ways, so I can't help you with that. But I can help you with avoiding cliche characters.

Whenever you decide you're going to put a character in your plot or to help your main character, think of a personality to fit the character. Once you've set aside the traits of a character (I don't want you to put names, sex, age, anything) set it aside for a day or two so whatever image you thought of is gone. Pick it back up and create the character that you imagine is least likely to have those traits.

For example - the crazy wizard. I think of a character that is there that mysteriously pops out of no where and helps your MC in desperate times of need. Powerful? Oh yes. A weak old man? Yes. Behind robes? Yes. A beard that stretches down past his belly-button? Yes. That's cliche. What wouldn't be is a kid that gets thrown into a situation that has strong magical powers. He doesn't stand behind your character out of choice, but is forced to. He can't grow hair on his chin no matter how hard he tries, and he likes to swing a sword around while wearing chainmail. Hell, let's even make it a little girl while we're at it. So you can have the crazy wizard while keeping the cliche part out completely.

Another good example is I've read hundreds of stories about dragons. Remember the first time you ever saw Shrek? All of the sudden donkey goes, "Ohhh you're a... girlllll dragon." I don't know one person that saw it coming. It was pretty good, and for a character that didn't speak once, she sure was unforgetable.
 

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Joe Abercrombie went out of his way to avoid all the clichés that he felt were littering the fantasy genre.
He still managed to include a few though :D

Thing is, whatever you do you'll either get someone shouting 'CLICHE' at you at some point, or be accused of being inventive for the sake of it - Why not just call those short people dwarves and have done with it? etc etc

If you look at some if the threads here you'll find that one man's 'Ugh, do I have to read about that again' is another person's 'Ooooh I can't get enough of that!'

Write the story. If it's good - the rest will matter little. Just try and make the story yours.
 
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