For those who helped me with 1st person POV

For all of you who helped me with invaluable advice on writing in first person, I would like to thank you again. I have posted the first scene in SYW and if anyone has time to look I would appreciate it. It is a fairly short scene, 271 words. I would like to know if it is written correctly in 1st person, POV.
Thanks
Jane

My first try at 1st person POV 271 words in Science Fiction/Fantasy SYW (password = vista)
http://absolutewrite.com/forums/showthread.php?t=158040

Maryn said:

I don't know if I actually helped, but your parents raised a girl with lovely manners.

How about adding a link to your SYW work? (That's redundant, isn't it?)

Maryn, who's supposed to be working out at this very moment (go figure)

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Thanks Maryn,
I would put a link up but I don't know how to do that.

Hugs,
Jane

Thank you Derek. Much appreciated.
Jane