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Need a beta reader for a YA novel (about 200 pages)

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ladyvincenza

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Hello,
I wrote a Young Adult novel for which I got critiques from young adult, teen and adult readers, who said it was pretty good (funny, keeps you turning the pages, etc). After I finished revising (or so I thought) and sent it to agents, they have all turned it down. I've heard among the reasons for rejection that the beginning didn't grab them. Is there a beta reader out there willing to help me out? If so, thanks in advance!
PS I'm not certain how beta readers are different from standard critiques, excuse my ignorance, so I don't know what to expect.
 

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I don't know how much help I can be, as I'm not a very practiced beta reader, but if you've had no other responses, I can have a go at the first few chapters and then if my comments seem useful, I can continue through the whole thing!

Would you be interested in taking a look at a YA fantasy in return? ;) Not necessary, though!
 

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Hi JPN,
I'd be happy to look at your fantasy, though to be fair to you I don't read fantasies and am prolly not the best candidate to do so.
Can you send me your email address so I can send you some chapters of my book?
Thanks,
Sarah
 
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