"Darker Passions" and the Like

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Was wondering what folks thought of these?

For those who don't know, these are a series of re-workings of XIXth century novels by author Amarantha Knight (a pen name for Nancy Kilpatrick). She evidently takes the basics of the original and blends explicit sexuality as well as bondage into their plots. The series includes the following titles...

Carmilla (which I've read--a good novel, if rather bloated in terms of just how many and how often folks are spanked)
Dracula
Frankenstein
Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde
The Pit and the Pendulum
The Fall of the House of Usher

I should mention while looking up stuff about this subject, I found some other works in the same vein by Colette Gale...
Master is an erotic re-working of The Count of Monte Cristo.
Unmasqued retells The Phantom of the Opera.
Bound By Honor all about Maid Marian of Robin Hood fame.

While Cathy Yardley wrote...
Crave: The Seduction of Snow White
Enslave: The Taming of the Beast
Ravish: The Awakening of Sleeping Beauty

All of which brings some questions to mind. What is it about these works that lend themselves to erotic re-tellings? And (for the sake of inspiration if nothing else) what other characters or stories might be retold in the same manner?

I freely admit that (for example) the works of Jane Austen or Charlotte Bronte might well form an interesting basis for such. Or maybe the Erotic Adventures of Sherlock Holmes? Alan Moore of course already pretty much united Peter Pan, Alice in Wonderland and The Wizard of Oz with his (very) graphic novel Lost Girls.

What do others think?
 

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I *think* it has something to do with unstated subconscious D/s themes. Control/not in control.... but that's just me. There is the power/loss of power/powerlessness theme going through them....
 

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Or a wish to read something that you first encountered as a young person that has been "revved up" to catch your interest once again?
 

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Anne Rice's Sleeping Beauty books were the first kinds of 'fairy-tales' I read that had been retold.
 

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I've read two of the Amarantha Knight ones (Dracula and Frankenstein) and I thought the pen name might belong to a man. Each lacked the touch and tone that make the telling erotic, for this female reader anyway. Not that they weren't hot at all, but the opportunity to make each one way, way hotter was missed. She failed to have her character react in any way other than physically. No emotional submission, no breaking his spirit, no self-doubt or loathing or fear he's a perv. Just golly-gee that sure hurts.

Curious, I passed them along to a romantic erotica critique group I was in at the time, asking if they felt the same. Those who responded did. (I never got either book back, damn it.) Kilpatrick is just on a different wavelength in her variations of BDSM than I am, I guess. Interesting.

In fact, one of the earlier pieces I wrote for that critique group was my take on how Kilpatrick should have written one of her scenes. I probably don't want to look it up on my hard drive. I've got a pulled back muscle that's going to make cringing painful.

Maryn, gettin' old
 
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I wonder what comes next? Winnie the pooh (and friends), who's into beastiality maybe. Then The famous five do orgies. And maybe even Alice in Latexland. :D
 

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I've read two of the Amarantha Knight ones (Dracula and Frankenstein) and I thought the pen name might belong to a man. Each lacked the touch and tone that make the telling erotic, for this female reader anyway. Not that they weren't hot at all, but the opportunity to make each one way, way hotter was missed. She failed to have her character react in any way other than physically. No emotional submission, no breaking his spirit, no self-doubt or loathing or fear he's a perv. Just golly-gee that sure hurts.
Thanks for putting into words precisely what I found missing in Darker Passions: Carmilla. The heroine/narrator is undergoing a definite period of growth as a person, but while that involves a lot of sexual exploration in terms of technique, there was none in terms of personal awareness. She learned nothing new about herself, felt no mixed feelings much less hesitation or doubt. It ended up all rather mechanical. Without a detailed emotional element, one spanking is pretty much like another, after all. Same is true of a blowjob, any penetration, being tied up, tickling, suspension, etc. At least IMHO.
 

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My feelings precisely, David. My WIP (which is on hiatus after a second draft, waiting for my brain to refresh) got ungodly long because my main character's personal awareness, self-doubt, mixed feelings, grudging pleasure, and finally acceptance took too long to play out. But at least it's in there.

Maryn, who kind of misses the dude, after spending part of every day with him
 

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I'll admit to having an ulterior motive for starting this thread. Recently, I downloaded the 1940s penny dreadful Varney The Vampyre and frankly am motivated to do something similar with the text. As it stands, the thing is overblown and melodramatic but methinks the stuff of a compelling erotic re-telling is there. My own thought is that especially at first it would be a matter of editing what already exists.

For the record, I'm not that into bondage and the like, so that will be nowhere near the level of Darker Passions. I'd rather it deal more with submission and seduction, the allure of the senses overwhelming learned behavior, etc.
 

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I have read a few of the originals. For Carmilla, there is a mistaken lesbian undertone (IMHO)... many modern critics accuse or assume the vampire Carmilla is lesbian, because of strong attraction to the main character. I disagree, in that at the time the peice was written (mid to late 1800's) women often engaged what is now categorized as "romantic friendship"... a definition that extends from Plato's concepts on platonic love... but I digress...

In answer to your question, some of the novels she has re-written were already erotic... she just pushed them into erotica. It's easy to see how Dracula could be re-visioned with more sexuality. I havent read hers, nor all the listed, but those I have, its easy for me see the extra step she would need to take, to take it one step further. =)
 

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The thing that lends these characters to erotic re-tellings is that they're free game, due to their age. Older fairy tales and novels aren't protected by copyright, as the original authors have died long ago.

You can find erotic retellings of a lot of current stories, called fanfiction, if you look hard enough on the internet. The difference is that nobody gets paid for those.