Dropping an author's fictional character name

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Carmy

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Hmm . . . Does that make sense?

Can I drop the name of a famous fictional character into my novel? He is referred to once by one of my characters, as if the man lives close by, and is in no way derogatory.
 

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Are you going to jar the readers by doing so? If you're going to throw readers out of the story by making them stop and remember this is a fictional construct, don't do it. If, on the other hand, you think it will work with the tone (surreal or humorous, maybe) and/or be caught only by a handful of readers who might appreciate it as an in-joke, you can probably work with that just fine.
 

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Thanks for your input, Claudia.

I don't think it would jerk the reader out of the story. If anything, for those who have read the very famous novel (made into a movie) by that other author, it should increase the sense of time and space.

I'm going to use it. If an editor eventually wants to toss it out, I shan't have lost anything from the story.
 

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How many times have you read a character refer to a "James Bond" style spy, etc.?
 

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What, like "Dr. Hannibal Lecter lived next door"? I think it depends on the story. If it's a famous fictional character but your book is a drama set in the real world, it would jar me. But if it's satire, it would probably have the right effect.
 

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This feels iffy to me ( though I am not a lawyer, nor do I play one on tv ). If you're including that character as if they live nearby, aren't you placing your entire story in the world that author created?

If it's a League of Extraordinary Gentleman sort of thing, all those characters were older, and perhaps public domain, and that may be why it was okay.

But if I write a novel and say Bilbo's living down the street, then obviously the world is based on Middle Earth.

On the other hand, if it's more like a fictional version of Riverworld, where famous people were transported/reborn, then it's clearly a separate world and a passing mention is still separated from the authors original world.

Like I said, iffy to my eyes.
 

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Thanks for your feedback.

It's a satire and only a few chapters take place in Europe, in a real part of the world the other author also used. One of the characters mentions the famous character as living nearby. He sees him occasionally and intends to give him something he could use. The famous character doesn't make an appearance.

I'm going to go ahead and use the name. Somehow, I don't think there will be any screams.
 
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