Help with an Excerpt?
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Welcome BootChaser!
You might get more bites on this if you place it in the Share your work Romance forum.
http://www.absolutewrite.com/forums/forumdisplay.php?f=68
FWIW, I'd say ditching the paragraphs you mentioned would be a good call. Neither paragraph is from a character pov and they sort of stall things as author interference.
You might get more bites on this if you place it in the Share your work Romance forum.
http://www.absolutewrite.com/forums/forumdisplay.php?f=68
FWIW, I'd say ditching the paragraphs you mentioned would be a good call. Neither paragraph is from a character pov and they sort of stall things as author interference.
aw, nuts. I thought that was where I was when I wrote this... SORRY! I'll delete this and move it there. Thank you so much 
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