Looking for a graphic novel beta reader

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Wasn't sure if I should stick this in the regular beta reader forum or CBGN. So, if I'm in the wrong spot, could an an admin please move me?

I've got fifteen pages for a graphic novel script I'm working on. It's my first attempt at writing for comics and while I've poured over this board and Digital Webbing, I'm still wondering if I've got the basics down pat. I'd throw the script up at Digital Webbing, but frankly...their reviewers still scare me. :)

I'm looking for someone with script experience to take a read through and let me know where I'm shaky, what doesn't fit, and so forth.

This is not a superhero script, it's in fact quite low on action. The focus is on building rich characters and a slowly unraveling plot. Story centers around a fictional town in Iowa in the early 80s where a corn farm has become infected with an unknown contaminant.

Shoot me a PM if interested and thanks much for reading.
-Lisa
 
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