Dear YA Forum,
Could I please get some plot critiques on my revised synopsis from somebody who doesn't automatically assume today's young adult generation--who lived through 9/11, videogames, and reruns of South Park--cannot handle a little death, sex, and boobies?
http://www.absolutewrite.com/forums/showthread.php?t=150025
Line by line analyses are nice, but I'd really like some opinions on the bigger picture issues such as character development, plot threads, and twists. Thanks for your time.
Sincerely,
Mr. Moe
Could I please get some plot critiques on my revised synopsis from somebody who doesn't automatically assume today's young adult generation--who lived through 9/11, videogames, and reruns of South Park--cannot handle a little death, sex, and boobies?
http://www.absolutewrite.com/forums/showthread.php?t=150025
Line by line analyses are nice, but I'd really like some opinions on the bigger picture issues such as character development, plot threads, and twists. Thanks for your time.
Sincerely,
Mr. Moe
