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BlackMagic528

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I got to thinking about something that may or may not be completely insane: chemistry amongst characters in a story. And what I mean by that is: how well they seem to go together, the feel (for the reader) of how they play off each other, and how natural the cast feels - like do they feel like they belong together? That sort of thing.
As a writer, do you ever wonder / worry about this? As a reader, do you even notice this? Does such a thing even exist in writing, or do I sound like a nut?
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I'll tell you why I was thinking about this: I honestly believe that the best cast I ever put together was for Knowledge Can Be A Dangerous Thing, my novel. I cannot tell you how nicely I feel Tracy, Michael, Raven, Alexis, Kiara, and Callie work together as characters. And I've said a zillion and one times, I feel that the characters are the single most important element in any story. I think chemistry among the cast is part of that. I have a series of shorts I'm trying to get off the ground based on the Knowledgeverse, and while I am happy with the cast . . . . I don't really feel that cohesiveness that I feel with the Knowledge folks.
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I think they're all solid characters with great backstories and intriguing on-camera stories, but for some reason that I can't quite pin down, it still feels like a throw-together bunch, not a well-oiled machine.
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Don't know why.
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So, that's what brought the thought to my mind. I doubt the situation is going to get resolved, because I certainly have no plans of changing the cast at this point. But, I did think that it would be worth discussing if anyone else even thinks about such things.

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I have to say, Patrick O'Brian is the king of characters that mesh correctly. Jack and Stephen (of the Aubrey/Maturin series) feel so right when they interact with each other and minor characters.

I'm still in the realm of early apprenticeship. I've finished the draft of one book, but I've worked on many a never-really-finished story. When I try to get a feel for how characters act around each other, I just write scenes with two or more characters (or one, seeing how he feels about other characters). They don't have to actually be part of my finished work. This helps the relationships feel genuine, at least in my eyes.
 

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I think it's how the story is written. If you write each character's part separately you can have strong characters and interesting situations but the whole thing is like when you load a cart with hay bales. If you don't interlock them, there will be huge problems (I know. I did this the first time I worked on a farm in my highschool holidays!). So the interaction among characters is very important. The way X reacts/interacts with Y must be continuous through the story (unless a change in this is critical to the ending). So my MC has a crazy brother and acts toward him with humorous intollerence through the book. Her dealings with the son and daughter of Lord Reginald are different to this and different to each other.

So I'm not sure it is the cast makes the difference but the way the characters are written as an interacting group of people.
 

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Making characters mesh is REALLY tricky. It's not as hard to come up with one good character here or another there -- slightly harder to have a winning couple or pair of friends -- but an ensemble gets harder. For me, I try to think about what they all have in common, and what divides them, so that no two characters fall into exactly the same "slot," so to speak.
 

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Well, they're (almost) all prisoners, so that's what they've got in common. (Don't think of jails; "prisoner" means something different in my writing.)

Differences . . . well, I'd have to go into a long description of each character's individual personality and situation to fully describe that. :) And I'm trying not to make my first thread boring. :) Suffice to say that there's some dramatic differences between tham. :)
 

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I'm in a funny situation. I have two characters who could totally be bffs, but are both too stupid to do it. It would be such a good ending! Ah! I have to make it work!
 
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