Grrrr having a block

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I'm half way through my current WIP, really enjoyed the last couple of chapters as I'm 'right in there' now if that makes sense. Except for one little factor that I have decided I don't want in it, it's not a major thing but a niggly thing that crops up throughout and can be changed with some work and cutting/pasting etc etc. Basically it's one of my main characters jobs except its more like his livelihood.

Running along side my sort of main story was this feeling of failure that he has about this job (which his father did aswell so he sort of felt like he had to do it to keep the tradition up blah blah). Anway at this point in my novel he has decided to give up on it, fighting a sense of letting his dead father down but feeling he has to for various reasons. But I just don't like it, it's steering my novel a way I dont want it to go. So I'm going to scrap the idea but now I am left with a problem, well not so much a problem but more a pain in the backside because I now have to give him another job (or do I?) and make all these alterations in the chapters to fit.

This character is a real 'do anything for his family' type bloke so I feel he would work hard at something. His kid is at a private school and he has a nice house etc so he does need a job or a way that he has made money in the past. But not in a dodgy way or anything.

So now I'm thinking do i just carry on writing and let this new story emerge and then when Im doing my first edit do I go back and change everything, or is that just asking for trouble? I'm up the wall with this now.
 

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If you want to crank the tension wheel, don't just have him consider giving up the job he doesn't like (with all of the emotional baggage of that decision), but crank it tighter yet. Give him a lucrative offer of other employment that would greatly improve his family's financial status. BUT...make it even more of an emotional wrench--make the offer from a business that was a competitor of his father's business, or make it a business that the MC considers ethically or professionally crappy, or make it a type of job he suspects he'll hate even more than his current job. Your MC now has to make a decision about what's best for the family and a lesser of two evils personally. Playing around with this kind of emotional train wreck can really impact your MC's actions and reactions through the main story arc. And just tossing around ideas like this may well break the damn that's holding your story back.
 

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Just on a practical note - when I've had problems like this, I've tended to go with the new storyline and then go back through and revise earlier sections accordingly during the first edit. That way you don't lose your momentum. It worked ok for me.
 

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If you don't like it, trust your instincts and change it. You can either go back and revise before you move forward, or make notes on what you plan to edit and continue on as if you'd already written them, then go back and revise later. You could continue with the job you don't like, but that seems like making more work for yourself than you need. And you'll probably skimp on the writing in those scenes because you know you're going to change it anyway.

I've done both -- revise, and take note and move on -- depending on the book. If I have a lot of forward momentum going and the changes aren't that big a deal, I just make notes and move on with the new idea, and revise later. If the new changes will affect the story in a larger way, then I go back and revise before moving on.

Either work. Pick what works for you.
 

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Thanks everyone for your suggestions. Going to sleep on it tonight and revisit it tomorow and see how I feel about it.
 
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