Balancing Both Aspects-Story and Character

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Hello everyone! I have had an idea for a fantasy book for some time and have finally started writing it this week. I know the basic concept of the story but I only have a vague idea of where the story will go. I have decided to write it in first person, using the past tense. I want to tell the story but I want my MC to mean something to the readers as well.​

My MC is basically writing to a world different from hers so I have her explain how her world works and such but I'm having a hard time balancing out the fantasy writing and story part with the character development part. I am wondering whether I should try to fix this now or just power on and finish the 1st draft (like I have been reading about). Sorry, if my quesiton is a bit vague, I'm having a hard time putting my finger on the problem.​
 

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I'd go with the write the first draft, then assess. If you currently have no idea where the story is going to go, then you have no idea what's going to fall out of it on the way, and stressing about things now that later on may seem pointless and unnecessary isn't going to help. Write what you feel you have to write, when you want to write it. Making it all make sense and be readable is the purpose of editing. Enjoy the pure writing while you have the opportunity, because editing can be a bear. Grrrr.

Or you can search the many useful threads here on outline creation ...
 

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Write a bit, then evaluate. Powering on till the end can cause problems if you're doing something that doesn't work. Trying to work everything out ahead of time can be paralyzing. At least that's how it works for me. I've got a rough idea of the major events and shape of the story, then I start writing. When I run out of steam, I stop and look at the story from the point of view of the major players, figure out what their attitudes and plans are at that point, get some ideas for scenes that will spring from that, and away I go again. So my initial framework is plot, but it all gets filled in by character.
 

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I agree with Judg. I write until something tells me I'm way ahead of my supply lines. I've gone off track in some way. So I re-read and re-write until it suddenly feels right. Then I go forward again. So I suggest keep writing but switch on all your instincts as a writer to sense any problem with character or plot.
 

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I once wrote a story with first person, past tense narrative. I thought it was pretty good. Beta readers thought it was better than okay, but felt something was amiss. I was fortunate to have a writing instructor look at it. He spotted several core issues, but the one that pertains to your problem is, in part, this:
... the entire story is told in past tense, first person. This eliminates the reader's sense that the protagonist can be threatened with mortal danger.
A large problem with first person narrative, is that the action is all off stage. I.e.: the narrator is recounting events that occured to her in the past (in retrospective, as it were) and she can only recount those events she witnesses. All else is hearsay.

First person narratives (and some tight third person stories, as well) also tend to have problems with info dumps. This is especially true if the world is, by design, unfamiliar to the reader (an alien planet, another dimension, etc). In third person, the author can "show" considerably more about such a world than he can when the narration is limited to the point of view of a single character (first person). First person works nicely when the action takes place in familiar territory (Los Angeles, Miami, Moscow, a sailboat in the Pacific, etc.). But things slow down then the narrator has to pause frequently to inform the reader about the place(s) where events occur.

Oh, yeah. My story? I recast it in third person past tense, followed some of my instructor's advice and it is vastly improved. It's currently being shopped--we shall see if the advice and rewrite worked as promised. :D
 

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I once wrote a story with first person, past tense narrative. I thought it was pretty good. Beta readers thought it was better than okay, but felt something was amiss. I was fortunate to have a writing instructor look at it. He spotted several core issues, but the one that pertains to your problem is, in part, this:
... the entire story is told in past tense, first person. This eliminates the reader's sense that the protagonist can be threatened with mortal danger.
A large problem with first person narrative, is that the action is all off stage. I.e.: the narrator is recounting events that occured to her in the past (in retrospective, as it were) and she can only recount those events she witnesses. All else is hearsay.

First person narratives (and some tight third person stories, as well) also tend to have problems with info dumps. This is especially true if the world is, by design, unfamiliar to the reader (an alien planet, another dimension, etc). In third person, the author can "show" considerably more about such a world than he can when the narration is limited to the point of view of a single character (first person). First person works nicely when the action takes place in familiar territory (Los Angeles, Miami, Moscow, a sailboat in the Pacific, etc.). But things slow down then the narrator has to pause frequently to inform the reader about the place(s) where events occur.

Oh, yeah. My story? I recast it in third person past tense, followed some of my instructor's advice and it is vastly improved. It's currently being shopped--we shall see if the advice and rewrite worked as promised. :D
Thanks everyone, your suggestions have really helped me!
Pthom: Now I am worried about my tenses and point of view. I don't want my story to be filled with akward pauses where I have to explain why things are this way in the world I am writing about. I could either change it to present tense or change it to third person...Shoot, I guess I have some re-evaluating to do. Thanks for giving me things to think about though!
 
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