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You finished the first draft and are either feeling hopeful or with despair at the work. Whatever the case, it's time for the next step on the journey. Revision!
So I'm setting up a thread where people can be accountable and offer motivation/encouragement as people sludge through the writing process.
Post a before and after of a sentence or three of something you've changed. Not too much, so we won't have to worry about password protection. I'll start.
Before: "You're quite good company for an evil spirit." The old man raised his hand and a pale cream teapot with blue swirls floated across the room. The stout matching cup hurried after it.
After: "You'requite good company for an evil spirit." The old man Colis raised his hand and a pale cream teapot with blue swirls floated across the room his office. The stout matching tea cup hurried after it.
Note: I wanted to tightened this and also help to give the location right away.
So I'm setting up a thread where people can be accountable and offer motivation/encouragement as people sludge through the writing process.
Post a before and after of a sentence or three of something you've changed. Not too much, so we won't have to worry about password protection. I'll start.
Before: "You're quite good company for an evil spirit." The old man raised his hand and a pale cream teapot with blue swirls floated across the room. The stout matching cup hurried after it.
After: "You're
Note: I wanted to tightened this and also help to give the location right away.
) Changes were made accordingly.