Trick Trish's Nightmare--the Continuing Saga

Haggis · Jul 13, 2009

Here's an extra special treat for all you hounds and houndettes this month. One of our favorite Supermods, Stew21 (Trish) seems to have a problem with nightmares and wants to get rid of them. I suggested she come over here and learn how to welcome them as we do. She declined. But she did make her nightmare available to us to do with as we will.

Personally, I think it has the makings of a great prompt, but it is NOT to take the place of or interfere with Effie's great prompt for this month. Go ahead and dig into this one AFTER you've done Effie's.

Here's Trish's nightmare. Have fun with it.

I'd love to be able to write from them and it's a great way to purge them from your head, too.
But the evil-monster-little-girl who was clawing my arm and trying to get me into an old wheelchair, who tore flesh from my arm when I kicked her in the chest to get away (it was solid as steel - she didn't budge), all the while at my creepy ex-in-law's house where they were trying to get me to take this "one little pill" just doesn't translate into stories too easily for me.

(it is easy to see, though, why I woke with fingernail marks in my hands, and why I was kicking and screaming.)

I'ma giving out a prize to the one I like best.

Stew21 · Jul 13, 2009

I'll try to read the replies though depending on how gruesome - read as "good" - you folks are, I might not make it through them.

But here are a couple more random details:

the little girl was probably 8-9 years old, thin, dark curly hair. pure. evil. She came into the room (where I was paralyzed and slumping on a sofa - trying not to take "the little pill" whatever that was), stood before me and spun this giant black ball around which transformed into an old wheelchair. she was pulling me to get me into the chair. Her little fingernails were like knives. She got away with some good chunks of flesh before my flailing and kicking woke Mr. Stew and he shook me awake.

Have fun!

dgrintalis · Jul 13, 2009

I am done my July prompt. And Stew, I'm usually more creep, less gore.

Stew21 · Jul 13, 2009

Creep is good.

Haggis · Jul 13, 2009

If they're really good I'll make Trish judge them with me. :e2teeth:

Stew21 · Jul 13, 2009

I'd do that!

(I added it to my sig)

It's the horror hound version of Pimp My Ride.

CACTUSWENDY · Jul 13, 2009

And the prize?.....maybe the decoder ring?.....hummmmmm?
(Have to pry it from his dead cold fingers....lol)

EFCollins · Jul 13, 2009

Aw Stew. I hate that your nightmare was so frightening for ya. I'm more of an in your head kinda girl-- I like to write stuff that messes with the mind. Not a whole lot of gore... usually just the illusion to gore. I've done my own prompt as well and this might just turn out to be decent.

Thanks for the material, Trish.

Stew21 · Jul 13, 2009

No worries. I'm used to them, I just haven't had one in so long it was a bit of a shock.

I am very excited though that they will be useful to you all.
That mod of yours is full of good ideas.

Haggis · Jul 13, 2009

Stew21 said:
I'd do that!

(I added it to my sig)

It's the horror hound version of Pimp My Ride.

And I stole your sigline.

Psst. Your link got truncated. Might want to try it again.

Kerr · Jul 13, 2009

It's taken years of purging Stew, but finally I think my own nightmares ran out. Thanks for sending over one of yours. Just wondering though, who's fingernails took the gouges out of your palms?

Haggis · Jul 13, 2009

Kerr said:
It's taken years of purging Stew, but finally I think my own nightmares ran out. Thanks for sending over one of yours. Just wondering though, who's fingernails took the gouges out of your palms?

*hears Twilight Zone music in the background*

Kerr · Jul 13, 2009

Hehe. I thought I'd help her out a bit with sending us tonight's latest details to add in.

Stew21 · Jul 13, 2009

oh, are we creating a serial now? I tell you my nightmares each night I have one, you write about it, I read it, which in turn gives me more nightmares and the cycle continues.

OMG - I'm the horror hound nightmare factory!!

DL Hegel · Jul 13, 2009

on my list! very cool

DL Hegel · Jul 13, 2009

can we do a poem?

dgrintalis · Jul 13, 2009

Stew21 said:
oh, are we creating a serial now? I tell you my nightmares each night I have one, you write about it, I read it, which in turn gives me more nightmares and the cycle continues.

OMG - I'm the horror hound nightmare factory!!

And you say that like it's a bad thing?

I'm already 300 words into a story for you.

Stew21 · Jul 13, 2009

DL Hegel said:
can we do a poem?

why not!!

Haggis · Jul 13, 2009

I think a poem would be outrageously awesome.

FOTSGreg · Jul 13, 2009

Hmmm, little girl with claws, woman being forced into a wheelchair to be taken inside a house and given a special pill, eh?

If I didn't have half a dozen other things going already I could work with this...

Let's see...

The protagonist's ex somehow raised a demon that assumed the form of a little girl with claws. After slaying the ex, it is now hunting down all the ex's ex's and family and the last ex is the last. The demon forces them to take a special pill, the taking of which is a symbolic sacrifice of their will which binds their souls to the demon and empowers it to exist in this world. The wheelchair is just a prop as the demon knows that humans fear being crippled and it savors the fear in its victims. If it manages to sacrfice its final victim it will have enough power to break free of the ex's ritual instructions and kill and maim at will.

DL Hegel · Jul 13, 2009

Stew21 said:
why not!!

Kmcelhinny · Jul 13, 2009

Reading the nightmare, and listening to Danny Elfman is an awesomely eerie feel. Thanks Stew21 for the ammo. Hope we can make it creepy enough for ya!!!

dgrintalis · Jul 14, 2009

Here is my offering:

Dark Girl

It turned out much longer than I thought it would be, but have at it.

Stew21 · Jul 14, 2009

dgrintalis said:
Here is my offering:

Dark Girl

It turned out much longer than I thought it would be, but have at it.

ooh goodie! can't wait to read it!

KTC · Jul 15, 2009

OKAY OKAY. I just freefell a piece. I am posting it now. THIS WAS FUN!!!!!!!

Trick Trish's Nightmare--the Continuing Saga

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