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Beta Reader needed for a Mythic/Urban fantasy

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Ananke2989

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I have been working on this book for a while and have had it read through by a beta I know already. She was a lot of help but I still would like it to be read by some others who may catch some grammar or spelling errors I may have missed.

Though that isn't the only type of assistance I would wish for. I would also appreciate someone who not only has an interest in Greek mythology (just a suggestion not a requirement) but would also be able to give me some advice when it comes to the plot or the themes of the novel. Critical or gentle feedback are both welcome.

The story is based in the present day but the Greek gods are the ones that exist though they are not worshiped. It begins with a man and woman on the run though it is their child who is the main character of the book.

It is at nearly 80,000 words, 24 chapters and 319 pages. There is some sex in it though not graphically described and also the main character is gay so if you are troubled by that then you will likely have an issue with the story. There is also some profanity but it isn't very harsh.
 

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Congrats on the first post. Might I suggest putting up the initial chapter at SYW and getting involved over there? I'm a newbie as well, and I've found the SYW forums fantastic.

Also, this sounds somewhat like Gods Behaving Badly. That's not a bad thing by any means, but it might be worth checking it out so you could explain to an agent or publisher why your book is different.

I'd be willing to take a look at the first chapter if you want to PM or email me.
 
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Hi!

I sent you a private message. I'd love to look at it.
 

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I've never heard of Gods Behaving Badly but thanks for telling me about it. From some reviews i just read i can see how my book could be compared to it but from what i can tell mine is much darker. Kind of heavy on character deaths. Though it does look like a book i might enjoy, I'm definitely going to read it soon.
 
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