An Odd Thought About Backstory

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Cyia

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This may sound a little strange, but bear with me. Something I do when I get stuck (so that I manage to make myself write for the day) is basically practice by finding a transcript of a movie or TV show on-line and trying to "novelize" a scene or two from it. If nothing else, it's good practice for conveying a scene and the information presented in it. (No one sees them, they sit in a junk file on my computer.)

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I've been on a bit of a Lost kick lately, so I looked up the Pilot transcript and after reading a bit of it, I think people with questions on structure (such as flashbacks/backstory) could find a good example in it.

It starts off in the middle of the action without too much lead in.

The scenes are in short bursts.

And most importantly, the pacing with the backstory is pretty good - and not right for a novel at all.

Over and over I've seen questions on how to handle backstory (small mention vs. detailed flashback) and I thought it was pretty interesting to note that if that transcript was a novel it would be mired in flashbacks with way more backstory than the reader needs. However, if at the intervals where the scene switched to flashback, there was a paragraph or so of thought or a line of dialogue from the character related to that flashback, the reader would get the essential information they need at the precise time they need it.

The writer needs the detail as character development, but a reader doesn't really need the play-by-play when just a mention would do. (The difference between print and visual, I guess).

I dunno, maybe it's just the way I see it, but does that make sense?
 

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I have no idea what you are talking about... sorry. :D I don't see what point you are trying to make unless it is that TV and novels don't always mix.

My friend is a screenwriter and he says he could never write a novel (what I do).
 

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I've never seen Lost, so I'm a little, um, lost too. As a reader, I like my backstory to come out either in dialogue or narrative throughout the story, or as a full-fledged scene, provided it's important enough. Depends on the story, though.
 

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I have no idea what you are talking about... sorry. :D I don't see what point you are trying to make unless it is that TV and novels don't always mix.

My friend is a screenwriter and he says he could never write a novel (what I do).

I was afraid of that (sleep deprived). I'll try again.

For the people who ask how to handle backstory - try looking at a flashback heavy show like Lost and seeing if you can't boil those 5 minute flashbacks into a paragraph or two rather than a full scene. (It's good practice for distilling pertinent information in your own "backstory" scenes - if you can slip in a paragraph in the middle of on-going action, then there's no reason to bog the story down in 3 pages of disconnected flashback)
 

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EW! I agree with the "...no reason to bog the story down in 3 pages of disconnected flashback."

I think there are some really discreet ways to slip in things that happened in the past. i.e. My MC punched his brother in the arm (jokingly) and his brother sais, "You've still got it. Ow." It shows that there is something in his past but I don't have to go in to detail about his underground fighting days. :) I'd rather slip things in that do an info dump.
 
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