Oh,oh,oh… I love the name Jack! I’d love to use it for my character who is a little bit naughty with a wink in his eye. I know, you’ve seen him many times before.
Hi, Pepper, and welcome to AW.
I have to ask:
If you already know we've 'seen him many times before' - er...why are you writing him?
If you already know 'Jack' is a cliched name for such a character - er... why are you looking to follow that cliche? Call him John, Jake, Blake, whatever, whatever, you're still chasing the cliche, right?
Why?
I don't know, maybe you're writing in a genre where that kind of button-mould character is de rigeur. But if you're not, why not use the fact your cliche alarm is already sounding without any help from us, and see where it's coming from?
Call him Marion (John Wayne, anyone?) Call him Sue (a boy called...). Call him Humbert Hum. Call him the furthest thing in the world you can think of from Jack, work out the effect it's going to have on him and maybe you have the start of a real character.
And what's behind that twinkle in the eye? The courage of despair (why? what happened to him to create that?); the desperate need to pretend he's a cartoon girlie heroine called Jack (why? what happened to him when he was twelve to make him need this affirmation?);the need to pretend he's an all-right guy (why? is he gay? reads poetry? had a daddy who told him to 'be a man' when he was beating him?)....
I don't mean to be harsh here, because we've all had to go through this one at some stage, but the best advice I can give is this:
Worry about the label when you've found something worth labelling. Not before.
Good luck!
Louise