Anyone want to Crit a Memoir?

MaLanie1971

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• May 7, 2009

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I posted an introduction to my memoir down in the SYW area. If anyone is available would you mind critiquing it for me, its short. Thanks!

 

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You crit mine and I'll crit yours.

 

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As soon as my eyes stay open all by themselves.

 

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Thank you!

 

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Exchange

If you are still looking for a critique, I would be willing to
critique in exchange for a critique of my book proposal?
Let me know.