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Shana Noelle

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I'm having a little trouble coming up with a title for my novel. Any tips on coming up with a suitable title?
 

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We sometimes play "Name that book!". We can do that if you'd like. Even if you don't like any of our suggestions, it might just help you to think of a title yourself. Just tell us a little about the story.


And with the usual disclaimer that some editor or publisher might want to change the title anyway.
 

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Okay, we can try that. I'm mainly just looking for a working title. There is a good chance I'll change it myself once I'm done. As for the story, it's about a young woman going through a hard time with her fiance. After a year and a half of dating, she feels likes he is doing nothing but pressuring her into marriage. At first she was all for getting married as soon as possible. But reality hits her fast and hard when he keeps getting angry with her for wanting to push back the wedding. And to add to the stress, an ex-boyfriend suddenly proposes to her also. Now she has to possibly hurt her best friend and her fiance all at once. After countless conversations with tears and harsh words said, she is forced to make a decision to go through with it or back out completely.

I really suck at summaries. So I hope that was well enough to get the picture across.
 

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Some ideas . . .

Indecision

Hard Choices

The One Chance or The Last Chance

The Broken Ring or The Tarnished Ring

One Step Down the Aisle

Veiled or Veiled Love

Change of Heart

Love Sucks (since it's a modern YA)

On Both Hands

I'm Not Getting Married (a takeoff on the song I'm Not Getting Married Today from the musical Company)

Whim or A Wish and a Whim

Caprice

What the Pictures Don't Show

The Bridal War

Breaking Hearts

The Obligation or An Obligation Once Removed

Big Day, Awful Day

The Proposals

Empty Promises

Dark Promises

A Promise to Keep

White Dreams

Forward, Backward

The Missing Ring

Reflections in a Diamond

Golden Heart or Golden Hearts Can be Broken

Burning at the Altar

The Sacrifice of [first name of character]

One Hand in Mine

Saying Yes, Saying No

Wedding Bell Blues (wasn't that a 5th Dimension song?)

White Wedding, Blue Wedding

Roadkill

Death in the Aisle

Running for Her Life

Dead Flowers ;-)

Take Back My Promise

I have no idea if any of these have been used for books before; probably some of them have.
 

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Are there any lines in the novel that you think are clever or that sum up the novel? Any images?

An unrelated question, are you sure this is YA? I ask because it doesn't seem very YA from this description
 

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I'd have to say it's YA because the main character is still in her teens.
 

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I didn't know until she posted that Sage has a book titled Love Sucks (or else I just didn't remember); it just came to mind given the details of the story. Sorry, Sage, I didn't mean to steal your title.

Maybe Love Gone Bad instead.
 

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Haha, I skimmed and didn't even see that.
 

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Hmmm, it depends on how it ends but:

Backing out.
Backfire dreams or love
Pushing Back
White Wedding Blues

I really liked alleycats:
The Proposals
Saying Yes, Saying No

And this comes from someone who can't name anything she writes except for her poems, and even then it's hard. :)
 

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Taking Back My Love! :p

It's actually a song I'm listening too as well...
 
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