Practice #24 - Challenge

What would be a good challenge to write?

  • A super short story - less than 150 words.

    Votes: 1 11.1%
  • A story where only one person in the scene is ever mentioned.

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • A word challenge - I'll toss out three or four words that must be used.

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • A taboo relationship - barring the standard no-nos that could get us all in trouble.

    Votes: 8 88.9%

  • Total voters
    9
  • Poll closed .

ELMontague

Alright everyone,

Let's write something challenging that's also hot.

Vote on one of these difficult assignments.
 

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Do you mean a non-standard taboo?

Would that not require making up a society that would consider a specific kind of relationship taboo?

Hmm...

That would be entertaining...
 

ELMontague

What I actually meant is the standard list of dont's you'll find in most submission guidelines. I took this one from the Ellora's Cave guidelines.

NO pedophilia.
• NO rape as titillation. Rape may be used as part of the plot action, especially supporting character development, but MAY NOT be presented in a positive light or with the intent to stimulate erotic excitement or pleasure. The hero may not be a rapist.
• NO bodily functions (e.g., “golden showers”).
• NO necrophilia.
• NO knives or other weapons stuffed in various parts of the female anatomy. It’s sad that this even has to be stated, but there it is.
• NO bestiality. This rule refers to common animals indigenous to Earth; this does not apply to shape-shifting protagonists and sentient “otherworldly” humanoid animals in sci-fi or fantasy stories.
 

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Would that not require making up a society that would consider a specific kind of relationship taboo?

That'd be what I'd have to do if I participate in this one (looking at how the voting is going). If I really consider it taboo (e.g. incest) I won't write about it. If I'll write about it, I might consider it a bit on the kinky or sleazy side, but not taboo. lol.

Then the question becomes, could I invent a society that considered with a specific relationship taboo in 500-1200 words? lol

J.
 

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What I actually meant is the standard list of dont's you'll find in most submission guidelines. I took this one from the Ellora's Cave guidelines.

NO pedophilia."


And by pedophilia do you mean sex by anyone under 18? The FDA just passed a ruling letting 17 year-olds buy the morning after pill without a prescription.
 

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And by pedophilia do you mean sex by anyone under 18? The FDA just passed a ruling letting 17 year-olds buy the morning after pill without a prescription.

Well, the Share Your Work forum for erotica has the following rule posted:

"Posts containing sexualized violence, non-consensual sexual situations, or underage characters in sexual situations are absolutely not permitted"

And in the U.S. underage - i.e. below the age of consent - is generally anything under 18 in a lot of states. So my understanding of the forum rules are "nothing under age 18".
 

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Oh, I have some ideas.

Sex between a man and a cyborg.

Sex between an elf and a dark elf.

Stuff like that.

Heck, you could even make something normal taboo in this society and still make it very titillating if you write it right. Not that I speak from experience...at all, I'm just making shit up off the top of my head.
 

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Hey, EL - I've already voted, (I'm that lone little 150 words vote - figured I could manage to post 150 words - lol) but I am curious as to what you meant by this:

"A story where only one person in the scene is ever mentioned."

That would have to be a masturbation scene, wouldn't it? And one where the character wasn't fantasizing about anyone?

J.
 

ELMontague

I was thinking of a real challenge, two or more people involved, but we know this only from the description, thoughts and feelings of one of the people. It sounded hard to me.
 

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So my understanding of the forum rules are "nothing under age 18".

Hmn very interesting. So in this erotica forum, a seventeen year-old women having sex with her eighteen year-old sweetheart or even her husband would be completely verboten? But if she killed him, then that would be okay?
 

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Hmn very interesting. So in this erotica forum, a seventeen year-old women having sex with her eighteen year-old sweetheart or even her husband would be completely verboten? But if she killed him, then that would be okay?

Yep! Doesn't make sense, but that's the U.S. for you.

Even Literotica has rules about that these days.
 

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Yep! Doesn't make sense, but that's the U.S. for you.

Even Literotica has rules about that these days.
Lit has always had those rules. Esp. underage virtually denying anything that even mentions a character under 18. Even in their Thoughts.... (I remember when I was 15 and tasted dick for the first time)... NOPE they're not gonna let you post it.

And america is so screwed up over sex and sexuality that even with ten pairs of hands and a laser gridded map it would be impossible to find your way through the quagmire it leaves us all in...
 

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For taboos, there's also teacher and student (in college so as to have everybody all nice and of age). You could write about a same sex relationship. You could set it in a fantasy setting with any two fantasy reces that hate each other, or at the very least wouldn't hop in bed (or wherever). Light elf and dark elf, elf and dwarf, elf and an orc (elves sure are hateful bastards), vampire and werewolf, or make two races up on the spot that dislike each other. Or you could have three or more fantasy races that hate each other, nobody said you couldn't do threesomes or orgies. In fact, there's another right there, you can have a threesome/orgie, many frown upon that.

Of course, there is always the easy way out; premarital sex. BTW, what's the policy here on adultery? Is that a no-no?
 

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I'm pretty sure adultery isn't a nono - This is what it says in Erotica SYW.

"Posts containing sexualized violence, non-consensual sexual situations, or underage characters in sexual situations are absolutely not permitted"

And of the things that you mentioned, the only thing that I see as "taboo" would be the fantasy stuff. I could imagine some scifi the same way. Maybe I'll come up with something. I am wayyyyyy outvoted.
 

ELMontague

Wow, people really want to play with taboos - or maybe the lurkers are really wanting to read some taboo.

There's still four days of voting, so we'll see where it ends out.
 

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Can you add the caveat of no incest either? Pedophelia is not incest.....
It just gets really boring to see I fucked my mom or screwed my sister.... ya know? I know I know.... just wondering - no big actually but I wouldn't read it to comment except to say EW....


These are So fun... Its been so long since I had anything to fire up my juices for writing. Yeah I write alot but there is writing and then there is Inspired Writing ...

Taboo relationship on its way!

(yeah I'm gonna cheat a little and get a head start LOL cuz I got a good one percolating that I don't want to lose!)
 

ELMontague

Christabel,

I'm glad the practice threads work for you. My goal is an active board. I think it helps us all grow to have an active community. Write away.

EL
 

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heh hehe heh

all kinds of fired up LOL


hey pretty pretty pretty please......someone go read and comment on Crusaders love scene for me please????
 

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hey pretty pretty pretty please......someone go read and comment on Crusaders love scene for me please????

I will try to get to it tomorrow. It's long. lol

Are you looking for a full crit, or just a comment?

J.
 

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Taboo in porn was usually family related. Interracial was taboo kinds up until the 80s. Teacher student was, but only if the student was underage. (acceptably)
I wrote a story about a woman who enjoyed being raped--it was clean, it was tasteful, and everyone loved it. Of course they didn't use it, but everyone told me it was the hottest thing they've ever read.
Taboo isn't what we perceive as wrong, it's actually wrong, illegal even. It's not breaking the law if it's done right, and it will evoke the response that only something that is wrong will evoke.
I spent half my sexual years with an erection thinking "I shouldn't be having this response" but I was. Our minds don't let us make such distinctions when it comes to sexuality sometimes.

As one of Erotica's greatest customers, my two sheckles.