contraction of a contraction

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I know this isn't really grammatically correct but it's a southern dialect thing.

Trying to have my narrator contract you'd and have. In other words,

"you'd've."

Or would it be "Youd've"

Or should I sacrifice the dialect because it sounds so close: "you'd have."

I've heard the former two from those with a bit of twang where I'm from. What do you think? How to write this?
 

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Stick with 'you'd've'. It's correct, and easy to understand.

'Youd've' is just plain wrong.

'You'd have' may sound too formal. These days the sound of 'you'd've' and 'would've' is so common you frequently see the less literate actually write 'you'd of' or 'would of'! :eek:

Honestly, the contraction is not unique to 'southern dialect'. It's almost universal in the UK unless someone is trying really hard to speak formally. I don't think anyone would have any difficulty recognizing the contraction for what it was.

Anyone, that is, except computer spelling-checkers...
 

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You'duv
You'dof

My students with very Southern accents might say "you'da" in certain contexts:
"You'da gotten a ticket if you'd been goin' faster."
 

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'Snot a contraction of a contraction, it's a double contraction. You'd've, he'd've, she'd've, they'd've, I'd've, we'd've -- ugly but correct. I would only use them in dialog, and leave the "have" whole for narrative. A real hick character could say "you'd of".
 

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Y'all'd've

Now that's southern! Y'all'd've known that if you grew up here :D
 

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I would have gone with Y'all would've.
 

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I say definitely it should only be used in dialogue and then sparingly. In general, if you've established where your character is from and what sort of accent and speech patterns they use, you don't need to try to represent every irregularity on the page. The reader can fill most of it in for themselves.
 

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I say definitely it should only be used in dialogue and then sparingly. In general, if you've established where your character is from and what sort of accent and speech patterns they use, you don't need to try to represent every irregularity on the page. The reader can fill most of it in for themselves.

I'm your huckleberry. I'm agreein' with what you're sayin', 'cept shouldn't it've been "Readers" to've antededed "themselves"?
 

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Urban dictionary says You'dve

Urban Dictionary is a website where random teenagers enter stuff. It is not a good source for professional orthography.

The generally accepted way of contracting "you would have" in US English is "you'd've".
 

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An apostrophe marks where a letter or letters have been elided.

And the rest of that handy rule inserts "or number or numbers."

It's: She is a last-century child of the '60s.

Not: She is a last-century child of the 60's.
 

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You have me thinking of the biggest number of words I've heard contracted. Too fun :D

I'm winning at 4, I think. Someone find more!
 
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