Hey, I'm looking for a Beta for the first fifty pages of my SF Romance Erotica. It's about 13,500 words of what will eventually be about a 60,000 word novel.
I'm trying to figure out if my pacing is good, does the chemistry/sex between the charcters work, if it is too descriptive (or not descriptive enough), etc. If you have a work in progress I would be willing to repay the favor.
Also, this has explicit sex, so please make sure you are over eighteen. Not trying to corrupt any minors...
PM me if interested.
I'm trying to figure out if my pacing is good, does the chemistry/sex between the charcters work, if it is too descriptive (or not descriptive enough), etc. If you have a work in progress I would be willing to repay the favor.
Also, this has explicit sex, so please make sure you are over eighteen. Not trying to corrupt any minors...
PM me if interested.