Turning off the internal editor

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Meredith

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...how do you do it?

Mine's pernicious. Sometimes I think I've gotten rid of her, only to look up and find I've spent five minutes of my oh-so-limited writing time jiggering around with a single sentence. Moving a word here, a comma there. Moving it from the end of the paragraph to the beginning. Chopping out an adverb, adding in an adjective, changing gerunds to past tense... argh!

I've set myself a pretty low daily goal, given myself weekends off, done everything I can to chain up the inner control freak. I tell myself -- constantly -- to fix it in revisions, for now just worry about getting it down on the page. But I can't seem to switch out of "audiencing" mode, where I'm not in my character's head or even my own head - I'm in the head of the Gentle Reader, judging every word, tsking mournfully aloud at random intervals.

Two things help -- journaling daily, which gives me practice just writing down random things that I know nobody else is ever going to read, and loud music played while I'm writing, which often seems to occupy my internal editor long enough for me to sneak in a decent word count.

Any other ideas?
 

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My internal editor comes out when I'm stalling and/ or when I don't know what to write. Since I can't move forward, I just futz around with what I have. It's an effective technique to avoid working on the problems I should be facing.

I also have been known to wash the dishes, do the laundry, and organize the linen closet to avoid figuring out the problems in my story.

I'm also learning to recognize what the problem is (this character is not acting in character or this conflict is stupid or why on earth would this character do x, when y makes more sense?) and once I've recognized the problem, I can begin working on the solution.

I have no time in my schedule to waste it with an uncooperative muse or internal editor. If they get out of line, I've got some duct tape and a cattle prod.
 

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I try to set aside a little bit of writing time specifically for editing chapters I've already finished. (Or if working in shorter forms then I edit something that's not currently mid-draft.) Usually it works best to put that task at the end of my writing "day" but every now and then I do it first.

The trick is to keep the editing from taking over. I try to limit myself to about ten minutes of editing per hour of writing. If I write from nine 'til midnight, I spend thirty minutes editing a previous chapter before I go to bed.

It is not always a perfect method as the editor sometimes gets away from me. But keeping her constantly locked up can be dangerous since she's more aggressive when she finally gets out. :)
 

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I give it something to do.

Sometimes I make it focus on trivial things, like making it Capitalise every Other word In the Sentence. It keeps it busy, so the actual material will be written almost subconsciously. Sometimes I write while playing a game of chess online at the same time. Again, the chess game ties down my analytical mind.
 

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I don't worry about it. Mine knows when to stop. At least for the day. It knows how to shrug.

Interestingly, when I read someone else's work, if it pulls me completely in the Editor goes to sleep. That tells me something, I think.
 

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**Bluntness warning.** You are not talking about a separate person over whom you have no control. That internal editor is you and no one else. You may need to develop some self-discipline--it's the single most important trait of any writer who is not working on deadline.
 
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I agree with Neuro and Matera - I don't have to "turn mine off". I don't even worry about it. I know when to stop and I know when to be critical.

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What makes matters worse for me is that, on occasion, my fixing or jiggling a sentence that's been bothering me actually drives me to write more. But that's way more rare than me editing a sentence for an entire session, once it gets going.

It's like the fact I need to get a new credit card since the strip is all worn out, but every once and a while it works at the gas pump so I'm encouraged to keep using the shitty card. (I still have it, if that says anything about me.)

I can sit down to write when I'm supposta, but as for turning off the editor, that works for me about 1 in 10 times. We both have something to work on, I s'pose :)
 

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**Bluntness warning.** You are not talking about a separate person over whom you have no control. That internal editor is you and no one else. You may need to develop some self-discipline--it's the single most important trait of any writer who is not working on deadline.


Self-discipline, you say? Is there a generic OTC available at my local Walgreens?
 

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Thanks for the replies everybody - it's good to hear other people's stories and ideas.

And Neuro - the "internal editor" is just a metaphor for my neurosis, not an actual psychotic break ;) - but we're totally agreed on the self-discipline. For the past year I've worked from home (I succeeded in moving from Chicago to Boston, but failed in quitting my job), so that's a muscle I've had to learn to flex on a regular basis. But I find it's easier to call up a sense of discipline when there's a deadline or a paycheck on the table.

I guess my challenge is to learn to bring it when I want it, not just when I need it.
 

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Two things help -- journaling daily, which gives me practice just writing down random things that I know nobody else is ever going to read...

Pretend you are journaling, telling the story for yourself and nobody else. You really are, on the early drafts. When you journal, the ideas matter more than the edits. Maybe you can try to steer yourself that way until the story is all down (or a chapter and then edit... that sort of thing).
 

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I wouldn't even consider turning off the internal editor. God knows what horrific piles of shite I might conjure without it. For me, it's about finding balance between writing and editing. I try to write as clean a first draft as I can, and that involves a certain amount of reading over and editing before the first draft is completed. But I can do that without getting lost in the minutiae. It's probably about finding some discipline and balance, and really, that likely comes with practice. Keep writing and you'll find the balance.
 

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I think there is a time and place for the internal editor.

But sometimes the editor/critic can paralyse us. I was once advised to:
"take him outside and shoot him."
 

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Now that I've seen so many responses, I realize I forgot to mention the one thing that helps me the most -- planning.

I'm not a planner by nature, I'm way more likely to just sit down at the keyboard and see what happens. And when I do that, sometimes things flow so easily and well that the internal editing just never happens; it's a great feeling.

The problem is, sometimes when I do that, things don't flow easily, and instead I sit at the end of a sentence with no idea what to do next. That's when futzing around with that previous sentence becomes so attractive -- and the sentence before it, and the paragraph before that, etc.

So one of the things I've started doing is taking a walk before my dedicated writing time - no iPod, no company. I use that time to set some goals for the next few hours, and then fiddle around with flourishes and dialogue in my head. That way, when I get to the computer, I have a far better chance of writing through the tough parts than if I'd never considered what to do if inspiration failed to show up for its appointment.

Unfortunately for me, it's been a cold, rainy, grim weekend in New England - so no walks for me. But I've got a new elliptical showing up today, and once we get that put together, maybe my self-discipline will be a little less weather-dependent.
:Sun:
 

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Personally, I wouldn't write without mine. Tried it, got lots and lots of pages of absolute crap that I never bothered to rewrite. Figured that it wasn't worth it.

So what if it takes me 10 minutes to get a paragraph? Odds are, that's a paragraph I'll probably never have to touch again, so it was 10 minutes well-spent. Much better than going back and fussing over it for minutes here and there over the course of the next year or so.

I'm a big fan of quality over quantity, personally. And that's what the little niggling voice saying "that sucks dirty duck butt!" is there for, after all.
 

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I've set myself a pretty low daily goal, given myself weekends off, done everything I can to chain up the inner control freak.

This is actually contrary to what you want to do.

You don't turn off your inner editor by giving it MORE time to edit. You turn off your inner editor by writing SO much and setting goals SO high, that you have no CHOICE but to turn off the inner editor in order to reach them.

That's the whole idea behind NaNoWriMo. You set the bar HIGH, and you write DAILY at high word count goals so that you HAVE to shut off the inner editor or not reach your goals....and not reaching your goals is not an option.
 

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What do you use to write? If you find yourself tinkering with your WIP on the computer because you can see every mistake on your screen, have you tried (1) turning off your monitor, (2) writing first drafts longhand, or (3) using an Alphasmart device?
 

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I think it was Stephen King who said to write and forget everything about editing as you do it. Even if it's an obvious misspelling or something, just keep going because you'll be editing it later ten times anyway.

My first book took me a few months to write, but after reading that I wrote the second in two weeks. It needed remarkably little editing for glaring mistakes: I think it was because the mental pressure was off.

That was my experience anyway.
 

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Tinkering is just a form of procrastination. I didn't realise this until I read the article below which I recommend to anyone who keeps wanting to go back and "fix" things.

Here is a link to a great article on this subject.
 
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If I find I'm getting stuck on a sentence, I use the angle bracket trick. Sometimes I know I'm not conveying what I mean correctly or I can't find the exact word, so instead of derailing my train of thought, I pick something close and surround the <word/concept/cliche/paragraph> with angle brackets and keep going. By marking the problem now, I can acknowledge the issue and keep going with a clear conscience because I know I'll go back and fix it later.
 
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